Rally M, no offense taken. I wrote this story years ago. Over five I believe. I found it in old files and thought I would share. I believe I am a better writer now than I used to be. I did not go back and rewrite what wrote long time ago except a bit in the last few chapters. I never intended my original characters to be major however. Thanks for reading.

It's written cold, honestly. He does THIS. She does THAT. There's no development in the characters(and your own characters might as well be non-existent) and the whole thing is written like a list. You can't write it assuming your readers know exactly what's going on in your head. Basic rule of writing: Show, don't tell. The story seemed like it had potential from what I've skimmed through but it didn't pull me in enough to read all 12 chapters full on.

I also risk seeming like a bitch on here considering isn't really known for good writing to begin with but I thought I'd say the truth since it's unlikely anyone else on this website will tell you and Ghostwriter's fan base is minimal to begin with.

Oh. Please write the sequel. So, Calvin is dating Alex's girlfriend?

I liked it.

Very nice. I like it. Poor Calvin though. Oh, my word. Did I just say that? Ha ha ha. O...kay. Twilight Zone time. Kidding. I liked the way you had Calvin grow up. Catch ya on the flip side.

wow. I can't believe it's been so long since I last saw an episode of Ghostwriter. Thanks for writing a story about it. I can't wait for the next chapter.

Great job. Catch ya on the flip sode/

Great job. Catch ya on the flip side.

Wow. Amazing. Keep it up. Catch ya on the flip side.

I love it, but what happens? I can't wait to read the rest.

I didn't notice a difference, but I'm pretty dense. Yay! Another chap! Keep it up. Catch ya on the flip side.

Continue, continue, continue, continue! I feel like I'm watchin' an actual ep! Please write more. Catch ya on the flip side.

love reading this story hope you can write more of it and the other stories you will someday write. from minimoon132002, p.s. hope you can me publish my stories and I like to hear your ideas for the next story you will write for ghostwriter