... I think you broke me...

This fic is fabulous, so very fabulous.



I need to go make my heart start beating again kthx.

This story is very good! I hope it isn't finished.

I am officially two days from waiting for half a year. This story is badly in need of an UPDATE.. Go ahead and update it!

this is wonderful, compelling and well written, is there more or is it complete?

Hana

Kya!! Make Kaname and Zero confessed their love to each other! UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE! Happy Ending please!!

i ached to read the next chapter. hurry up and complete this wonderful fic of yours.

"Dancing"? that wasa great, really, this chapter was well done.

urgh...sigh...hey, i'm touched, the last part was... eww... a lovely picture.

an excellent story to focusing from the start unt now, good use of descriptive words, equivalent of a poem that's been written down, it is very romantic, yet mixing with dark love, when reading this i can feel sensual of emotions, the first chapter of pinch of struggling that looks like kidnap/rape is a brilliant way to show that they both have their own conflictions, and still fighting each other, what i love best is that you got both personal characters in their right state of mind, no ocness, and zero still denial and stubborness is showing wonderfully. i love to see the outcome of this story and how it will turn out, so please keep up the great work X3, you make readers hypnotize by your work while at it * cus i know i am* X3.

Uwaah...
Totally beautiful and...intense. Reading this chapter leaving me almost breathless. Just simply marvelous.

Although you have written a most intriguing tale, I must inquire as to your utilization of a most euphamistic dialect for the protagonists' dialogues. It certainly gives the impression that those being represented are not only more sophisticated, but that you have taken them quite out of character to portray them in such a light. On a lighter note, your description of Zero and his reactions is amazing, and I thoroughly enjoyed reading them.

I'm too upset for word...
Kuran Kaname, you're a bastard.
Poor, poor Zero... I wish someone would be a saint and kill you so that you don'y have to suffer anymore...sob

T__T poor zero!
update fast! this is a really good story!

best first chapter EVER!
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*squee* good chapter :3
update soon ^.^
i cant wait to see how you develop
their relationship further :3

-evilgoddess1990 loves ya