I love this. I really hope you didn't discontinue it.

Gosh, for a moment I thought Vergil would gut Kyrie just out of spite. I dread kids but there's something in stalking newborns that chills me to the bone.
I wonder what Vergil plots... He's got his own body so it's not like he's looking for a vessel...

I hope you'll clear up the Dante part of the chapter. I'm confused how he got to DMC. He wasn't in condition to ride... but I can't imagine Vergil giving him a lift. XD
Dante's reaction was rather chaotic. Maybe he got a concussion of doom. XD

Aww, you shouldn't feel sorry for rendering Nero human! The higher risk of getting injured/killed only adds spice to the story. Now he can't bang into action head-first, he needs to think of a plan. ^^ (Dante could use this therapy too. xD)

Oh so Vergil is about eh? Killing or just taking babies and children? What is he looking for? What is he seeking?

And how come Dante managed to stay on that motorbike for so long without crashing into a bush, or a tree? How come he had to get all the way home and crash into the side of the wall? Lol...

Just joking. It was a really good chapter, and very descriptive. Loved the bit about Trist drawing a finger in the condensation of the window pane...

Ok, I tried writing in here the few things I thought you should take a look at, but the silly thing wouldn't let me do it all. So I'll send that to you via email. Since when did FanFiction limit review lengths? That is so idiotic...

its sosuspencefull, i must know what happens. please post thenext chapter.

Ah, I hope Vergil (or whoever it is ;P) will treat Nero kindly and let him survive to show off in following chapters! ^.^
That's a very interesting start. I wonder whether Nero will lose his powers completely and how he would cope with that. It's very fresh to finally see him as a human, and living with Kyrie no less. I hope you will continue!
(I remember you from dA by the way. That Sephiroth pic is impossible to forget.)

Oh... Yes, definately want to read more! I don't know Devils and Demons very well, don't know it much at all really, but that never put me off reading a well written story, lol.

Just one sentence made me chuckle...

Nero squinted his eyes, trying to make out a face to the coat covered arm.

If it were me, I'd try maybe writing it like this...

Nero squinted his eyes, trying to make out the face of the man who held out a coat covered arm.

Fantastic start...Eagerly awaiting more!

omg..u gotta update soon..