Hey, this is really good. You're not going to stop writing now, are you? It's not nice to leave readers hanging. :)

Whoa. Now THAT's entertainment. Sort of like watching another anime arc, except that your writing's quite a bit more detailed than the plots in the anime. Sigh... wish I *could* see this on film! Very, very cool, very well done. As for a sequel, go for it! Please?

Would love to see this as part of an epic. A little trippy, indeed, but a fascinating read!

I love it! Could I post it on my webpage? Onegai?

It's so good! I love Hisoka angst...*sigh*. I hope you write more soon.

HISOKA! I love this! More, more, I say!

Trippy indeed...LOL. Interesting though! And am definitely interested in seeing more of it, especially the experiment bit...that wouldn't have been Tsuzuki, would it?

Ah...my precious fic...no one cares about us. *sniffle* So I'll try to make myself feel better by reviewing myself. This is unedited, not even spell-checked, so excuse any mistakes. It would be even nicer if someone pointed them out...