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CGandJaz
2009-11-18 . chapter 9
Love this story very hilarious
the dialogue was awesome
great mix of genres
the final scenes were excellent
holz32
2009-10-17 . chapter 9
yay what a cool story loved it!
Bunnyhops
2009-09-12 . chapter 9
fabulous story!
Nightzchild
2009-08-19 . chapter 9
Am I strange for thinking that the image of Harry, Ginny and Draco all curled up together is kind of cute? Anyway a very impressive story. I'm not usually a fan of the Marriage Law fics but this one was certainly more convincing than any of the others I've read and it was also extremely well written. Nice job.

Nightzchild
DoctorFang
2009-08-18 . chapter 9
this is a really good story. i loved it. great job!
ladie snape
2009-08-07 . chapter 9
lol, loved it, wish it was longer though.
twilightrockz
2009-07-29 . chapter 9
That was a very good story!!
ViolentAi
2009-07-26 . chapter 9
That was a great story! Sexy and hilarious. Two thumbs way up! *heads off to read your other stiroes*
cafana989
2009-07-22 . chapter 9
interesting ending loved the story though great job!
bioncafemme
2009-07-16 . chapter 9
Wonderful story over all. Ohmygawd threesome in Lucius's bed!! lol
dimensioner
2009-07-08 . chapter 9
I think the meeting with Kingsley was a bit anticlimatic, but him having to marry Umbridge in the end and showing up with her was brilliant.
Draco, Harry and Ginny - care to write about them as well? I think they fit quite well together.
Great story, I'm glad I found it.
Back to reading one of your other stories now!! Keep up the good work!
dimensioner
2009-07-08 . chapter 8
As soon as I read about the 2 teacups I knew a dose of Veritaserum was coming, and sure it was lots of fun to read! I like the way you describe their relationship.
And Hermione's way of admitting her love was ** fantastic!
dimensioner
2009-07-08 . chapter 7
I would have really thought that Lucius would be more shocked at his son being gay, but it's good that he wasn't.
dimensioner
2009-07-08 . chapter 5
Lust and stamina potions always seem to work better than Muggle versions! Not that I ever tried, but they always strike me as more effective. Perhaps that's due to the fact that the writer's and the reader's imagination go wild as soon as those words show up... ;-)
Good chapter!
dimensioner
2009-07-08 . chapter 4
‘Very well.’ He got up. ‘I’ll go and have a look at the stables.’
‘Lucius, you know perfectly well that there are no stables on this estate. But if you want to sulk in peace, do so by all means.’

That's my favorite line in this chapter, if not in the whole story! I also would have imagined Lucius' mother like an older version of Narcissa, so your Pandora comes as a really pleasant surprise. I took an instant liking!
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