 CGandJaz 2009-11-18 . chapter 9Love this story very hilarious
the dialogue was awesome
great mix of genres
the final scenes were excellent |
 holz32 2009-10-17 . chapter 9yay what a cool story loved it! |
 Bunnyhops 2009-09-12 . chapter 9fabulous story! |
 Nightzchild 2009-08-19 . chapter 9Am I strange for thinking that the image of Harry, Ginny and Draco all curled up together is kind of cute? Anyway a very impressive story. I'm not usually a fan of the Marriage Law fics but this one was certainly more convincing than any of the others I've read and it was also extremely well written. Nice job.
Nightzchild |
 DoctorFang 2009-08-18 . chapter 9this is a really good story. i loved it. great job! |
 ladie snape 2009-08-07 . chapter 9lol, loved it, wish it was longer though. |
 twilightrockz 2009-07-29 . chapter 9That was a very good story!! |
 ViolentAi 2009-07-26 . chapter 9That was a great story! Sexy and hilarious. Two thumbs way up! *heads off to read your other stiroes* |
 cafana989 2009-07-22 . chapter 9interesting ending loved the story though great job! |
 bioncafemme 2009-07-16 . chapter 9Wonderful story over all. Ohmygawd threesome in Lucius's bed!! lol |
 dimensioner 2009-07-08 . chapter 9I think the meeting with Kingsley was a bit anticlimatic, but him having to marry Umbridge in the end and showing up with her was brilliant.
Draco, Harry and Ginny - care to write about them as well? I think they fit quite well together.
Great story, I'm glad I found it.
Back to reading one of your other stories now!! Keep up the good work! |
 dimensioner 2009-07-08 . chapter 8As soon as I read about the 2 teacups I knew a dose of Veritaserum was coming, and sure it was lots of fun to read! I like the way you describe their relationship.
And Hermione's way of admitting her love was ** fantastic! |
 dimensioner 2009-07-08 . chapter 7I would have really thought that Lucius would be more shocked at his son being gay, but it's good that he wasn't. |
 dimensioner 2009-07-08 . chapter 5Lust and stamina potions always seem to work better than Muggle versions! Not that I ever tried, but they always strike me as more effective. Perhaps that's due to the fact that the writer's and the reader's imagination go wild as soon as those words show up... ;-)
Good chapter! |
 dimensioner 2009-07-08 . chapter 4‘Very well.’ He got up. ‘I’ll go and have a look at the stables.’
‘Lucius, you know perfectly well that there are no stables on this estate. But if you want to sulk in peace, do so by all means.’
That's my favorite line in this chapter, if not in the whole story! I also would have imagined Lucius' mother like an older version of Narcissa, so your Pandora comes as a really pleasant surprise. I took an instant liking! |