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Cheerful-Pessimist
2009-11-13 . chapter 1
Hey. Just thought i'd drop a review to let you know that if you ever do figure out what to do with this i'd be reading it XD It nice to have something like this out there, that's a bit different. But if you ever write some more, I look forward to the appearance of more of the beyblade team :)
kelseywazhere
2009-01-26 . chapter 1
oh. I REALLY like this story. Really really REALLY like it! I love how you make us feel every emotion running through Rei. It's so emotional! i love how you made it go from funny to sad to angry so swiftly! please do update soon!

(*o*)kelseywazhere(*o*)
Kinomiya
2009-01-09 . chapter 1
good job! i liked it, i hope you contiunue
BesserwisserForHire
2008-12-29 . chapter 1
Oh why yes, do continue this! I like it, you manage serious fics and humorous and you do it damn well. It's really kind of choking, which is a good thing since the emotions of the story is affecting me as a reader. Really like it.
michigesso
2008-12-16 . chapter 1
THis is realistic in the sense of minority versus well the white kids. Well at least I have heard of similar things like this in Canada.

But I hope Rei stays strong!
Babybluekitten
2008-12-14 . chapter 1
I loved it. It must have been really hard for teenagers back then. Hope you update soon, I'm curious as see how this will turn out.
Personnh
2008-12-14 . chapter 1
The way you've expressed the setting and atmosphere of that period is amazing. :D It'd be great if you continued it!

^.^
Ghost of the Moon
2008-12-13 . chapter 1
i really really like this

you have a really good writing style.

continue??

im willing to beg

and offer cookies
xHitsulover.
2008-12-13 . chapter 1
ah coewl ! love it
TheFallenangel927
2008-12-11 . chapter 1
I am so glad that I didn't live in the 1950's. One, I'm mixed (White, Black, Hispanic and Asian) so I wouldn't be accepted anywhere.
Two, I'd probably flip and go crazy or something. Seriously, I never understood racism.
But I'm surprised that you can keep your style while having such a serious topic. Keep it up! ^-^
Echo in the Dark
2008-12-11 . chapter 1
HEY! I really enjoyed this. I like this new kind of perspective. It bothers me that so much hate was thrown around in this time, especially because I'm white and I don't think in racial terms, so its a little mind blowing for me. But I love this new point of veiw after reading everything from the black perspective. You never hear about asian and hispanic segregation much, if at all.

Loved it, and other people should notice this and freakin' review and so I can get the next chapter! ... So, who was the guy asking Rei for help? No was Kai, obviously... lol

PLEASE UPDATE SOON!?!?!?
Sunshine Cove
2008-12-11 . chapter 1
And this my dear, is exactly why I love you so much. You can immediately change your style and pull it off so wonderfully that one would never suspect you'd written anything but. Of course, as you acknowledge, there are a few things here and there (missed letters/words, grammar points), but in the larger picture they are not even noticeable =D You've still got your sharp-tongued dialogue and cynicism, but that's what makes reading your work so enjoyable. Must agree with you on the whole racism thing; minorities still get a lot of flack, but not as much as we used to =) I'd really love to read more, so please do write something if you ever get around to it =D And really, should the poor white boy (Kai I assume (but you know what they say, "to assume is to make an ass out of u and me..." )) have to apologize for whites in general if Ray doesn't want to represent yellows in general? Little harsh, don't you think?
suzanne
2008-12-11 . chapter 1
it was intersting so far and i can't wait to read the rest of it and can you please update this story and other as well it was good so far and cya until next time ^_^
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