awww kawaii *3* loved it-sure u could have slowed it down a bit in the middle but all in all its a piease of art ;) good job!

:D :D :D :D :D

i couldn't stop smiling while reading this story!

Adorable! (o)

It's a good story. Hiyono and Ayumu are my favoirite couples as well . to tell you the truth it did seem to be fast but I still think it was a very good one shot. keep writing

Definitely love their bickering. It's so sweet

i'll definitely be waiting for more of this! ;D

i love this couple the mst in Spiral too! ;)

hehehe

there aren't a lot HiyoAyu fics so i'm desperate finding them,.,. :)

kep up the good work and i'll be waiting for more! :D

Funny and cute! I'm looking forward to your future AyuHiyo fics. (Great job with characterization too!)o