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Reviews for: Before The Dawn
Tsubasa no Tsuki
2009-01-18 . chapter 1
Menyahh (sound of me being a soppy git) -blows nose really loudly- That really made me cry, nicely written and sweet but not overly sentimental. Very nice ^^
Writrgrl
2009-01-02 . chapter 1
very well written, i wish there were more.
Orochimaruismyman
2008-12-30 . chapter 1
Oh! It's absolutely beautiful but soo sad!! What's with the two of us lately giving KakaSaku sad endings?? We're torturing poor Kakashi!

Really really loved it hun, very different theme from the usual KakaSaku and I loved the oneshot aspect of it and how Kakashi was already dead, so no matter how much you wanted it to it couldn't have a happy ending.

My favourite line was: “When the morning comes you’ll be breaking my heart all over again.” Dunno why. It just spoke to me. Beautiful.

Gorgeous work as always, but I never expected anything less from you! ;)

Lotsa holiday love from your dedicated fan,

-O'smyman XD
Mewsthecat
2008-12-20 . chapter 1
that story is just amazing! it's just so fantastic!
Pance
2008-12-13 . chapter 1
that was good *wanders in search of a box of tissues*
peace out
AnimeFTW
2008-12-12 . chapter 1
I just finished reviewing the latest chapter of "Plans of the Hokage", and I was surprised when I saw that you wrote a one-shot!

I just finished reading this story, and it was a tear-jerker! I took your advice and listened to the song while reading this, and I was tearing up! This is the saddest (the emotion, not an insult) story I've read today!

It was sad that they didn't get to tell each other about their feelings when Kakashi was alive. At least we know that the feeling was reciprocated.

I loved how Kakashi left Sakura his hitai-ate. At least she'll have a possession of his, along with the "dream".

Other than the one swearword in here, the story doesn't need to be rated M. Just a thought.

As always, I look forward to the next chapter in your stories, or excellent one-shots like these!
Rene2
2008-12-12 . chapter 1
You totally ruined my day...this was so incredible sad, you almost made me cry. Nevertheless, liked it very much. And you're right, the song suits it just perfectly. I guess I have a new addiction now :-)
Thank You!!
Trinnerti
2008-12-12 . chapter 1
Loved it hun. Really did
MagicMuffin
2008-12-11 . chapter 1
oh, okay, that was a tear jerker. i really enjoyed that, thank you.
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