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Tori-chan
2009-03-21 . chapter 1
I liked it ^^ I wonder if they will ever confront each other?
Winged Monkey
2008-12-19 . chapter 1
Again, very cute. Congrats for finishing everyone! You did a really good job on exploring their characters in a new and unique way. This last one, especially, was very sweet. Great job and I look forwards to reading more of 'Absence' when you get it up!
Simone Robinson
2008-12-15 . chapter 1
Awesome awesome awesome...cant wait for the next one. oh btw are you gonna write the other turtles seeing other rooms (does that make sense?) Anywhoo, great, keep up the good work ;)
Patterson1219
2008-12-13 . chapter 1
Oh, Mikey's room! I was so excited to see that you had updated... couldn't read it until today because of stupid finals! *sigh* Wonderful take on Mikey's personality in this... especially from Donatello's perspective, it was simply stunning! My absolute favorite part:

The room was chaos set lose on earth. How anyone walked through this, let alone found anything here, was honestly beyond his comprehension. And he did quantum mechanics in his spare time.

Haha, I LOVED it! And for the many realizations that Donatello came to... plus the Christmas presents! Certainly can't wait for the final installment of these... Donatello's room! Thank you so very much for taking time to write and share these stories with us. You're AMAZING! :)
bonez1925
2008-12-13 . chapter 1
Awesome! I love Mikey so making him look like more than the jokester and prankster is really cool!
Lovelinelivelong639
2008-12-12 . chapter 1
OH it was so cute i loved it
LOVED IT
oliviasbizzaremind
2008-12-12 . chapter 1
Just wanted to say thank you for finishing Mikes room story! It was worth the wait! I think you potrayed Mikey perfectly thru his belongings!
Petrea Izefia Matkeoo
2008-12-12 . chapter 1
Yay! Good story.

Great work.
tFantasyFan
2008-12-12 . chapter 1
Huzzah! Another entry in the Rooms awesomeness! So well written, an excellent study of character, awesome and fantastic and all those other words of praise you find laying around. A couple small typos here and there, but like hardly noticeable at all. Loved it.
54Viruses
2008-12-11 . chapter 1
:) Mikey may act like it, but he's not shallow!

...okay maybe a little.

Fantastic story, as always. I love how Raph is once again at fault. XD
shadewatcher
2008-12-11 . chapter 1
cool stuff. very well set up. i always wished that they had done a more in depth look at the TMNT characters personalities and habits.
Ozlex
2008-12-11 . chapter 1
Another great installment. I'm glad you had Donatello exploring Mikey's room. In the original movies Don and Mikey always had the best relationship I thought which was really cute. They only had it in the movies though not the 80's cartoon or the 2003 cartoon. I think your kinda bringing it back with having this story.
gypsywriter135
2008-12-11 . chapter 1
As always, beautiful job and loved it!
SilverSmile
2008-12-11 . chapter 1
WOW!

That was such a good story!

The story flowed really well and the diverse range of emotional responses made throughout the entirety helped keep the story interesting and unable to be looked away from.

My favourite line would have to be 'The room was chaos set lose on earth'. That made me laugh quite a lot when I read it!

This series of stories is such a cute and sweet lot; I'm so happy you wrote them in such a way that did them justice!

Keep up your normally excellent writing and good luck with the last few chapters of Absence!

SilverSmile
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