this is perfection

NICE!

I've read this twice now, all the while listening to Bruce Springsteen's song. It's well-written and undeniably hot.

Thank you for writing it. =)

That was absolutely beautiful!!
It was sweet and hot and not too graphical, which suits the situation!
I loved it!
One thing, though, you wrote "She’s the image of Athena on top of some great monument in Greece , she’s perfect and he’s going to touch perfection."
Did you choose Athena deliberately? Or was it a mix-up with names?
Because Athena is the companion and protector of warriors and the goddess of herioc endevour and the virgin patron of Athens.
She's generally used as a symbol for strength, heroic deeds, sometimes even for intelligence and wisdom.
But never for beauty or perfection, as you used it(or at least that's what I think you used her for).
So what I think would fit the context better is the greek goddess Aphrodite, the goddess of love and beauty.
So maybe you meant Aphrodite, but typed Athena instead?
I think it would fit the context better if you used Aphrodite...
Anyways, it's your story and you get to decide what fits best!:)
I really liked your story, more than I can say with words, so please don't feel offended by my criticism, I was just trying to make it a bit more perfect!:)
Hopefully you'll write more Lexie/Mark fics in the future!!
Love,
Mer

def dig the story. so real. keep on trucking, because i'll be waiting.

I'm so glad you decided to post this here! This is great. I love the give and take between Mark and Lexie and you've described that beautifully!