   The Tomboy in Pink 5/18/09 . chapter 1it needs more like what happens next |
| CynicalDreamerC 3/30/09 . chapter 1 Please carry on !
It was great so far ! ) |
| The Final Lament 2/25/09 . chapter 1 good but needs another chapter |
| brannon 12/23/08 . chapter 1 more! Your nephew says more now before I hurt you! |
| redheads-have-more-fun-HPLVR 12/11/08 . chapter 1 i like it. please write another chapter! |
| DarkDefender89 12/11/08 . chapter 1 love it update soon.
what Bella would say: "Edward, bite me!" (seductively moaning( |
| Jenna 12/11/08 . chapter 1 look forward to your next ch |
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