 The Tomboy in Pink 5/18/09 . chapter 1it needs more like what happens next |
 CynicalDreamerC 3/30/09 . chapter 1Please carry on !
It was great so far ! ) |
 The Final Lament 2/25/09 . chapter 1good but needs another chapter |
 brannon 12/23/08 . chapter 1 more! Your nephew says more now before I hurt you! |
 redheads-have-more-fun-HPLVR 12/11/08 . chapter 1i like it. please write another chapter! |
 DarkDefender89 12/11/08 . chapter 1love it update soon.
what Bella would say: "Edward, bite me!" (seductively moaning( |
 Jenna 12/11/08 . chapter 1 look forward to your next ch |