Well then... It's been a long road, hasn't it?

While I got to skip waiting for five years and read everything when this was nearly complete, your the one that actually had to sit and write this all out, and that in itself is amazing.

Your style of writing, with its action, romance, and borderline rated M material, has enthralled me, and inspired me to write my own stories.

This may be the end of the book, but I'll be sure to keep an eye open.

May we meet someday

-Delta-

Wow...Best series of stories I've ever !I'm glad you finally finished it!Although,I can't help but wonder...Is Clockwerk really dead?After all,all you did was launch him into body could survive the initial re-entry should he ,best story I've ever read!I really didn't see any of this ending coming. I thought they might escape,but...Murry and Jing?And Steven working for ANOTHER mysterious person?

I liked it,it was good,I'd put these stories right up there with Harry Potter and the Inheritance Cycle and stories like deserve to be published and I hope to maybe see them in print one day.I'd be willing to spend over $100 to buy I'm rambling. Good luck!

Wow, what a ride. When I initially began reading this story, I had no idea the kind of scope this story would end up taking. It's amazing to say the least.

And yet, it doesn't feel like its over. Those last few passing remarks in Aftermath give me hope that another story is on the horizon, but if not, I feel content after this.

Congratulations on this fine story. I hope that in due time I can pick up an original story of yours off of a bookstore shelf.

Great Job,

Winnow

Hmmmmm. This ending seemed a bit too "IT'S FINALLY DONE AND I WANT TO RUSH IT OUT ASAP" and happy. Though the cliffhanger ending was unexpected. I like that.

i like the story i hope u keep going oh and their going to be a sly 4 its called theives in time i think and how i know is infamous2 and gameinformer

You must update so I may read the awesomeness

I am so ready for the ending. I've been a long time for this.

Another great chapter. And here I thought it would be the last one. This finale has been extremely climatic already. I can't wait to see what happens next. Really, you have me wondering just what is going to happen next.

You're a heck of a writer that's for sure.

I gasped when I saw this. I didn't expect the next chapter to be so soon! Huzzah for the unexpected!

I can't really think of much else to say because I'm lazy and I have this horrible taste in my mouth.

Im still reading it and every second of it

Connor and Dawn's relationship is only taboo if you consider it modern times. Only a hundred years ago, your second cousin was still basically a stranger. Besides, it's not like weirder stuff hasn't happened.

And I'm with you, the clone is dead. She might possibly live for a while, but with the mantle rising into lower Atlantis and the elevator shaft filling with oil; she's dead.

It was a great chapter as always. I can't wait for the end.

I don't know if you tied him in to the story yet because I haven't caught up to where you last left off. 35 chapters so far right? Any way, I wanted to know if you are going to tie in the shadow apprentice from Spy Cooper. (A story worth reading right there.) It's what...2025-2026 in DoP, right? So that would've given the shadow apprentice (Sorry about using 'shadow apprentice' so much. I forgot the guy's name which is weird because he is one of my favorite characters in Spy Cooper.) about...say 20 or so years to hone his skills. Not only that but he also has ties to conner's parrents. If he and 'Eleven' AKA Elvena decided to stay in contact with the Coopers like the shadow guy suggested or went with Eleven's plan, which was (If memory serves my right 'it rarely does') to dissapear of the grid and sever any and all ties. Either way it could help contribute to the plot. He could help conner out in the feild or he could just be used as an information character. If you already tied him to the story and by posting this the only thing i'm acomplishing is wasting my time and your's... I apologize. If he hasn't been introduced and if you liked my suggestions and you do tie him in... Thanks. He was great in Spy Cooper and The way his 'master' or whater you want to call it (i know what his master's name is but can't spell it worth a... well... you get the point.) got killed off in Lament... I just think that deserves a spot in the story. I think I remeber the name now... I think it was Calen who was the shadow apprentice in SC right? Once again apologizes for wasting you're time if he is already in future chapters. Great now i'm starting to rambal and if I don't stop know I'll never shut up. xD sincerly- TBOR aka 'Lake'

Wow. When I saw this in my inbox I think I scared half the neighborhood.

Anyway, hooray for updates! It's been a so long I forgot the begging! yet still able to impress, which is awesome.

I would like to say that all your stories have given me inspiration for one of my own, and for that I thank you.

Can't wait for the rest!

-Delta-

This chapter was well worth the wait, but I was lost for most of the chapter. No idea what was going on because it's been ages since I've read this. But I'll get back to this chapter eventually!

Christ.

I just did a marathon of reading all of your cooper stories: Lament of Carmelita,Spy cooper, and Dawn of progeny. Not to mention you Christmas an Valentines day stories.

Now I'm stuck here, with a huge a** cliffhanger, and now I'm hyperventilating waiting for the last chapter!

I gotta say, your one hell of a writer. And your romance scenes in ALL of you stories were amazing. At one point I was just staring at the screen saying "That is f-ing beautiful..."

...anyway, you are an amazing writer, and despite some minor typos here and there, you pulled this off beautifully.

Now if only I waited for the epilogue...