Cute one-shot

Nice take on Edward meeting Jasper and Alice. It always seemed quite rude for Alice to steal Edward's room like that, but it makes sense if she had a vision of him being okay with it. I liked Edward's thoughts about Jasper; he can immediately see his world essentially revolves around Alice's happiness.

lol! Edward and the irrepresible Alice. Loved the reference to Bella at the end, as well as the bathos of Edward having to carry all his stuff back. And Rosalie was probably off laughing at the thought of edward's stuff in the garage. So many of the family dynamics in such a short space!

Wonderful. I love how this piece brings out Jasper's character.

Amazing story! Concise and sweet, but realistic enough to not be over the top. Alice is so funny with her "I'm going to be you favorite sister" business, and I liked the glimpse of Bella at the end. Great work!

Great little fic! You portrayed the characters perfectly, Alice so deliriously happy, Jasper cautiously optimistic, Edward's amused frustration. I loved the ending, poor Edward!

I love it!!

Not much to say except for AMAZING!
I loved Alice here.

-Sivan

Very nice. I can really picture the first encounter between Alice, Edward and Jasper playing out that way.

I usually don't read too many one shots, but this was just so good!

this was a great story! your versions of the characters are perfect with SM's. i loved it. :)

Aah, Alice IS a vision. Loved the story, and Edward's sense of frustration with Alice. In some ways, that never does go away!

Oh wow, great story. Really loved it!

This is wonderful. I was just recommended it today, and although I have a ton of work to do, read it immediately. What a cute vision of Alice and Edward meeting! Your characters, even as short of a time as we see them, seem to flow seamlessly with SMs.

:)

-Pants

this was awesome. your portrayal of the characters was 100% accurate, in my opinion. i absolutely loved it!