Love it, kinda confusing but good.

Great start to what is sure to be an awesome story. I'm hooked.

"Did you really just use information on the man who killed my son as bait to entice us to be your Avatar's lapdogs again?" --jaw literally hit the floor. Plus a little Maiko smexiness doesn't hurt!

Very interesting so far. Can't wait to read more!

Wow, it was like, from the first sentence.. I was completely in it. It doesn't happen alot that a first chapter intrigues me like this. Keep updating, please!