It would be amazing if you would give this same story from each of the character's perspectives

lol i love it

I love it! More please!

Hehe, funny. :) enjoyed it. :) Thanks for sharing.

*smirk* niice! :D lovely fic.

Cute. But try bolding the words or italicizing them instead of using *s next time, makes it less jumbled. Nice work.

Fun little piece! ;) Jack should look before he speaks! hehe

*snort*

I love i can see Jack doing that, and Jacob finding it hilarious!

:DSo hilarious and funny.I love it.

"*HE* calls you dad but *I* can't?"

Snerk. Very cute.

This was good. I love Jacob's unreadable look at the end considering what happened later in that episode.