Oh wow. That was beautiful. I love your descriptions and how you portray the relationship between them. At first I kinda thought, "Wait, grounded?" but it really does make sense since all their parents really know is that they've been gone for almost two freakin' years.

I always did think of Riku as having siblings and the idea of him being youngest is interesting. It really is a good motive for his wanting to get away from the island.

Oh, and bee-tee-dubs, I did spot a few typos. Surprisingly few, actually, since it seems so many people don't look very carefully for things... It was mostly just a word left out here and there, little things like that.

But anyway, ramblings aside, great story.

*blinks* You write for Kingdom Hearts too? I am so very spoiled.

This made me sigh very happily and contentedly. I love Riku and Sora's relationship and you portrayed it beautifully. Not too over the top, yet not emo-y, which seems to be the trend here on . >_

Wow, I never thought of what would happen after they returned to the islands. Being grounded and going to school would be at the bottom of the list of what I expected of them to do. But, really, to have them just sit back and not continue on with their lives would just be weird.

I love how you showed their interaction. Switching between seriousness and friendly teasing, it really shows how good friends they are. Hm, I would love to see Riku's reactions when Sora introduces him to Tron and takes him to Neverland to fly.

I really like how you've written this story. You have a great style and the story was quite good as well.

Congratulations, really. I loved how you showed Riku's and Sora's friendship and fondness toward each other!