Aww... so sad. Amazing story. Keep it up!

That made me feel quite sad... good job :)

Really good.

Nice... You're a very descriptive writer... Keep it up!

-Red

This really could be the continuation of the story, tho I find it hard to believe that there could be a human that looks in any way like Lady Amalthea. But its very good, and I enjoyed it.

Beautiful Sniff Sniff so beautiful. I AM SO HAPPY THAT SOME ONE WROTE A LAST UNICORN FIC! (cheers and waves flags.)

That was good. You should write more. I love the Last Unicorn, unfortunately I am the only one out of my friends that does. Ah well. It's a great film and a great book, and that was a great piece of fanfiction. Write more... )

very good. I wish it were longer.

I like it. Good tone, very wistful but not overdone.

Very sad and wistful, well carried through.

I like your story. It is really good. I found it a good read, Icouldn't take my eyes off of the screen. (I'm not kidding)

Cool. ]

Write more...

GWEE! I love The Last Unicorn! ;_; It's such a beautiful move. This story was wonderful. You are such a great writer, Shads! :D

Cute.