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indecisiverice
2009-06-04 . chapter 1
Words cannot describe how adorable this was. <3

And Suzaku would have chapped lips... so IC. ^-^ And Lelouch's reaction was the best thing ever! 8D
realityfling18
2009-05-07 . chapter 1
love it
Max139
2009-03-28 . chapter 1
i want to know what happends! i want to know what happends!i want to know what happends! plez
L'Archel-Hotishi
2009-01-04 . chapter 1
You should continue this. I really liked the way you wrote about Suza and Lulu. They weren't OOC at all, which i think is cool! :D
itachi and naruto's puppy
2008-12-30 . chapter 1
Ano, I only have one problem with this...
I NEED MORE *angsts*

P-pretty please Lawli! more LuluSuza pwease? *gives the puppy dog eyes*

9/10
J'adore mi amore
2008-12-29 . chapter 1
THATS SO CUTE! they both subconciously wanted it and they reject it. Denail is my favorite stage of a yaoi love story. Cant wait to read the sequal. I think i will now
J Plash
2008-12-27 . chapter 1
Aw. So cute! They're so silly :P Nice job on the details; Lelouch's defensiveness about Nunnally, the awkwardness about Lelouch's mother and Suzaku's inability to empathise, the fact that however awkward and cold Lelouch is, Suzaku's father and the rest of the population of the shrine are busier and colder still...and Suzaku feeling self-conscious about having chapped lips was just gorgeous, totally made that bit. Trying to involve kissing or anything like it in fics about nine and ten-year-olds is always a little difficult, lol, but what you did with it here worked rather well :) Very sweet, very xmassy, nice work :D
Kisuru-chan
2008-12-26 . chapter 1
Aw. I could not stop smiling through the entire thing.
Very, very sweet~
Poor Lelouch. His reaction is priceless. xD
AA ForShort
2008-12-24 . chapter 1
haha that was too funny! I love sexy misunderstandings like that :) Keep Writing cuz you obviously have agreat ideas in yer noggin! Off to read le sequel!
Shizumi-chan
2008-12-21 . chapter 1
That was just one of the most adorable things ever x3
mochiusagi
2008-12-20 . chapter 1
aw so cute!
Sparxyu
2008-12-20 . chapter 1
That was cool! Good job,. Lawli-chan! Merry Christmas!
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2008-12-15 . chapter 1
aw... cute
Keoi
2008-12-14 . chapter 1
AHH that was too cute! XD
xxxCodeTsubasa
2008-12-14 . chapter 1
Yay! Are you helping Santa Clause in bringing SuzuLulu Fluff to every yaoi loving girl and sometimes boy? XD lol SO CUTE! >w
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