A great story. Very good.

Aw. This is so sweet! It makes sense that it would be hard for Ed to become a completely decent guy in a few weeks, Aslan or no Aslan. Lucy truly loves him, though, which is adorable. Love it, Irish!
~Silver~

I like! Old habits die hard, indeed. I've always imagined that Peter was Magnificent from the very first, but it took years for Edmund to build up his reputation as the Just. Of course Ed would feel a little of the old jealousy! This was very sweet. *hugs Edmund*

That was very sweet. The fact that Edmund is not quite Peter's best friend yet, but is still working on coming around, is very realistic. And your Lucy is such a darling. "'I think you're magnificent.'" Nice touch. And you obviously proofread... *extra* nice touch! Please keep writing.

Hey Irish! This is really short, but it's ispirational. I like how Lucy tells him that she thinks he's magnificent, and how you made sure that we knew that Ed wasn't being all 'evil Ed' and the way he was before.
I never really thought about how he would feel, with Just being compared to Magnificent. Good job! =]

Aww! I loved this! For a short fic, it was very sweet and within character. I like the minimal description too--in the right places, and just enough to get the scene in my head. Well done (and it made ME smile too)!

A nice little moment. I like it. :)

Cute, cute, cute! Ooh, I love how...raw... And simple this was, yet it still was clean cut and vey touching. Nice work, a great one shot. I would love to hear your input on my first fiction. Check it out when you get a break from finals pressure. :-)

And THAT why I Like Lucy!

I like that! I just can't think of anything else to say! That's how I'd imagine Edmund to be, and you've really done it. Looking forward to checking out your work!

Very short, but also very sweet and I like the way Lucy tries to make Edmund feel better and he accepts it for what it is this time, which shows the mark his experiences have left on him. Not to mention Aslan!

Aw, it made me smile. I think you captured the characters very well :)

As expected, a great little bit of fluff. I like it.