This was great! Good job on the story! All the senses were so cool! That was a great way to write a story! Congrats. ^_^

that was really really cute...I enjoyed it...I love them getting together its the fun ackward stuff thats so good...very well done~

OH that was soo good! All of it was very fun to read!!

And I loved how you did each of the senses... very, very nicely done!

i like it. not big on the whole ronon\keller

You described the scar that Jason has from that moron smashing a pint into his face. Loved Ronon identifying everyone by their scent- very Ronon. These are all so good. And so relevant to these two people and their personalities. Ronon with scent and touch and Jen with sight, hearing and taste. I really loved taste and smell. Very well done. :)

Oh, this is great - lovely writing, well done! The part about Ronon's knife selection still makes me ROFL! Love the sensuality in the 'Smell' section, and love this sentence from 'Touch': 'He wondered if her skin would be just as warm beneath his lips- squee! And as for the 'Taste' section...needed a cold shower afterwards! Very interesting structure to this fic which you've made work really well. Like the authenticity moment of the dictionary definition too. OK...finished gushing now! J07 x

I really enjoyed the story. The format was interesting and worked really well. Loved the line about the selection of knives in his hair.

So effing cute and real I loved it!

Loved it! My fave was smell! Loved the whole scenting thing - how it was subtle but still something he noticed. Very well done! Kudos to the plot bunnies! :)

I totally love how you broke down the Sateden word at the end of the fic and the described the parts, just like they would in a dictionary. It gives your story a ring of authenticity that I appreciate.

Very nice R/K story. Methinks there are going to be precious few of them after the whole "Brain Storm" debacle.

I loved the story. Interestingly formed it was great! :D

very cute and well written.. loved it!

M, that was nice -- all warm and gooey -- like cobbler! Great job on this!!

Enjoyed it very much - like a wonderful dessert. Isn't there a story around this site somewhere about "sex in a bowl". Kind of reminds me of that at the end. BlondieCG

That was awesome. I loved Ronon going after the guy who wouldn't leave Jen alone, and then Jen not being able to sit on her hands and let Sheppard take care of it all. :) And Ronon's ability to "detect" who's coming by their scent, and the descriptions of how he can tell which one of them is which. So cool.