Please hurry in writing another chapter. I have thououghly enjoyed the story so far! ;)

very intresting, cant wait for an update! :D

Ha! I love it! It was entertaining, and intriguing and I've been waiting for a Jonathan/OC fic for a while! I'm really looking forward to reading the rest!

You should definitely continue this one! I LOVE it. And it is always kind of cute to hear from Germans XD Could it be that your relatives are German? Or are you German? Then I'd envy your for your great English, wished my were that good!

But PLEASE continue the story!

I am SO GLAD I found this story! You haven't updated for almost a year though, so that's the only bad thing about finding a story this great! Please think about keeping it going... it really deserves it! :)

*snigger* "It smelled quite strongly of horse dung." Heh.

Dear Len, I certainly do hope you are planning to continue this story? And soon too, if I may be so bold as to make a request. Please? I really like the story so far. It's lighthearted and fun, but with the promise of some dangerous nastiness and bodily harm - which is always terribly exciting. The scene in the library combined both, and was very clever. Seriously, I hope you're not abandoning the sory, because it is not only interesting, but well written to boot! Your OC is not a blatant Mary Sue and I find myself interested in seeing her and Jonathan develop their friendship. Jonathan is depicted in a way I feel is very close to the movies, and you've given him a depth I've only found in one other Mummy fan fic. Good work, old mum! Jolly good!

This is wonderful! Oh, I hope you update eventually. This is very well written and original. And Jonathan is my favorite character, so yeah...please update! :)

I just stumbled upon your story and am absolutely loving it. When can we expect a new chapter? I am craving more. Not only did I love the Mummy movies, but I am also Elizabeth Peters' biggest fan and have read all of the Amelia Peabody books. Jonathan has always been my favorite character from the Mummy movies: a scoundrel but at the same time charmingly lovable! He adds that comic touch that make the movies so watchable (again and again). You write his "voice" incredibly well. It comes across as believable and within his "character." I am adding your story to my favorites list, and I hope to be rewarded with more chapters soon! Keep it up!

This is a really great story. I was disappointed to see that you haven't updated this story in a while. It's a shame because it was really turning out to be a really great story. I hope you haven't forgotten about this story and update soon. I can't wait to read what happens next. :P

*grins* I read this story a long, long time ago, when it was but two chapters long and I waited for it to update and sadly I finally abandoned my hope. Stumbling upon it again, I didn't remember it at first but then i did and I'm happy to see that you finally updated this absolutely fantastic story! I remember, all those years ago *pretends to say it in a reedy, old voice* that I was stunned and gratified to find a story featuring Jonathon as the lead character, and to find him as someone interesting and solid. An absolutely wonderful story and I hope, *gives puppy eyes* that I won't have to think it's been abandoned yet again. Please update, for a fan from forever ago? Please? Naja

i loved it! please update soon!

ok...so I really hope you're planning on finishing this, cause you write Jonathan really well.

Seriously, if you think you might not finish this, tell me now, so I can try to forget I stumbled across this story.

This is, quite simply, priceless. You have Jonathon's voice perfectly, and I'm hooked on the storyline. I'm hoping that you'll update sometime in the near future?...

Anyhow, good work and all that sort of thing, love the story!

I love it so far.

Please update soon

Hey, this isn't too bad, considering some of the other stuff that's out there. I'm looking forward to keeping tabs on this one. You've got an actual character here, which is cool. By the way, you mentioned that your character is from Portland. That wouldn't be Portland, Oregon by any chance would it?