 kikiharuka13666 2009-11-14 . chapter 14i love this story |
 Hev99 2009-11-07 . chapter 1Huh scary start! Will keep reading, hoping not to cry or hide behind blanket! |
 Carlisle060 2009-08-30 . chapter 8that is so nice !
i feel so happy for bella if i was edward!
but it wasnt nice that bella almost got raped though!
like this chapter alot! |
 LellBell3 2009-05-31 . chapter 16Nah gotta love those Bella/Edward fluff moments. |
 squody3015 2009-04-25 . chapter 15Wow, this has been such a good story! I like how you've written the story to show how strong Bella really can be, and I definatly like how this didn't turn out to be one of those stories where she is helpless and gets raped.
You conveyed the characters' turmoil very well, and the ending was good too. It had nothing to do with the horrific events that happend and everything to do with their love for each other, very sweet ending! |
 xheartkreuzx 2009-04-05 . chapter 15fantastic story! |
 mhgood 2009-03-30 . chapter 16Wow, this was a very well-written and emotional story! I've got to say, I'm so glad Bella didn't actually get raped--that would have been too horrible, The way you plotted it was perfect, though. Rose was amazing, and Edward's angst was spot-on. :-) |
 mystify23 2009-01-30 . chapter 15i love the story.PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE continue! |
 Devil Nightmare 2009-01-24 . chapter 15This seams pretty good
want more of bella and edward
asap |
 deafening-silence-215 2009-01-20 . chapter 15i love this story. don't leave me hanging |
 marium 2009-01-16 . chapter 15i think that the ones in prison should get what is coming to them, but i thing the judge should make it sting while they weasel their way out of this trial but fail. keep up the good work! update soon! ^-^ |
 Gothic Saku-chan 2009-01-15 . chapter 15loved it update soon |
 swervin35 2009-01-15 . chapter 15Wow, what a wonderful place to end. I would love to see how Bella handles a trial but with or without it you did a wonderful job conveying the everyone's emotions. |
 jueguini 2009-01-15 . chapter 15I enjoyed this story so much, I started reading this evening and couldn't stop, it was so so interesting and anguish but still sweet because of Edward. Overall, nice job, very well written, they're all in character and I love fluff too! :)
I would love to read a final chapter though ^^ I'll never get enough of those two =P it would be interesting also to know the sentence ^^ |
 Wintermoth 2009-01-15 . chapter 15I no want it to be over.
*cries*
But if this IS the end, post an AN telling us so. Please. |