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kikiharuka13666
2009-11-14 . chapter 14
i love this story
Hev99
2009-11-07 . chapter 1
Huh scary start! Will keep reading, hoping not to cry or hide behind blanket!
Carlisle060
2009-08-30 . chapter 8
that is so nice !
i feel so happy for bella if i was edward!
but it wasnt nice that bella almost got raped though!
like this chapter alot!
LellBell3
2009-05-31 . chapter 16
Nah gotta love those Bella/Edward fluff moments.
squody3015
2009-04-25 . chapter 15
Wow, this has been such a good story! I like how you've written the story to show how strong Bella really can be, and I definatly like how this didn't turn out to be one of those stories where she is helpless and gets raped.

You conveyed the characters' turmoil very well, and the ending was good too. It had nothing to do with the horrific events that happend and everything to do with their love for each other, very sweet ending!
xheartkreuzx
2009-04-05 . chapter 15
fantastic story!
mhgood
2009-03-30 . chapter 16
Wow, this was a very well-written and emotional story! I've got to say, I'm so glad Bella didn't actually get raped--that would have been too horrible, The way you plotted it was perfect, though. Rose was amazing, and Edward's angst was spot-on. :-)
mystify23
2009-01-30 . chapter 15
i love the story.PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE continue!
Devil Nightmare
2009-01-24 . chapter 15
This seams pretty good
want more of bella and edward
asap
deafening-silence-215
2009-01-20 . chapter 15
i love this story. don't leave me hanging
marium
2009-01-16 . chapter 15
i think that the ones in prison should get what is coming to them, but i thing the judge should make it sting while they weasel their way out of this trial but fail. keep up the good work! update soon! ^-^
Gothic Saku-chan
2009-01-15 . chapter 15
loved it update soon
swervin35
2009-01-15 . chapter 15
Wow, what a wonderful place to end. I would love to see how Bella handles a trial but with or without it you did a wonderful job conveying the everyone's emotions.
jueguini
2009-01-15 . chapter 15
I enjoyed this story so much, I started reading this evening and couldn't stop, it was so so interesting and anguish but still sweet because of Edward. Overall, nice job, very well written, they're all in character and I love fluff too! :)

I would love to read a final chapter though ^^ I'll never get enough of those two =P it would be interesting also to know the sentence ^^
Wintermoth
2009-01-15 . chapter 15
I no want it to be over.

*cries*


But if this IS the end, post an AN telling us so. Please.
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