Wow, that was... Tragic! I love the ending! A great ending to a great piece!

Holy crap! This was so...epic. It was like a good novel. Everyone..except Bebe...died. I like that a lot about this, but I'm still kind of shocked. Anyways, I really liked the fight between Stan and Kyle. Also I like that Kyle went mad and didn't send out the message, definately a kinda redeeming quality for him. Oh and Kenny, he was perfect! Also LMAO at Craig being in this and marking the X's. Oh and Bradley/Ike was aw, poor Bradley. Also the fight between Ike and Kyle was intriguing and nuts, however it was well writen. Also Kenny and Butters was adorable. Also Wendy was brilliant as well. I really like the ennding a lot. I remember when Kenny mentioned that Bebe would record the events, and I was thinking oh, she wouldn't even know what Kyle did. However I do like that it was better that way. Also Cartman dying! I was shocked he died so early on in the story, but it serve to show Kyle's ways.

I'm left reeling from this story. I was randomly flicking through fics, and came upon this, thought it looked interesting etc... and it was! This was exceptionally well written for a fanfic, and the plot was gripping.

The only thing I found slightly ambiguous was whether Kenny, Wendy and Butters died or not. Could you please clarily that for me?

Anyway, it was amazing. Stan an Kyle... oh my god. Just oh my god.

Very well done.

--L&L

wow...i loved this story, it was utterly amazing, it was so beautifully written, the most amazing story ever, it awed me in so many ways and the passion i felt while reading this was astounding. you truly have a skill for writing, this was...im so struck with passion that i dont even think there is a word to describe how good this story is, i really really truly enjoyed it so much,you have no i idea, it was amazing. keep writing. your incredible.

Wow another amazing story hun, i rlly like it ^^. sorry i havent gotten to this sooner, jus been busy

Okay, first of all, it was a great story- lovely characters, no writing mistakes, no grammar mistakes, clean, with a great plot and awesome ending, but I still have a few notes:
First, the story went too fast- you barely gave the readers time to understand any of your original characters or to even know them. It felt very rushed.
Second- the relationships between the characters. Kyle and Ike? Kyle and Stan? I had no idea what's going on. It's not enough to tell- you try to spoon-feed information to your readers while you don't show enough.
But aside from that, my heart really missed a beat when I read the last line- it was quite a good story. Thank you for writing it.

Wow...

Thats really all that could come out because right now Im crying

Yes Kenny you went out with a bang and you will be remembered forever

I pictured everything ur very good at visualisation i love u for this

This is seriosly one of the best stories iv read... ever

and i put great emphasise on the word STORIES not fan fictions

this was a beautiful way to end it terrible and dark of course but perfect... It wasnt any of that happilly ever after crap that burns at my insides its bliss

ur a wonderful writer and i strongly urge u to consider it as a carreer

i know iv sed it before but once again if u do bring out a book let me know

regards

omg.u.killed.kenny (oo)

wow that was amazing.
I was afraid it would end all cheesy, like Kyle realizes the error of his ways and they live happily ever after. Awesome story.
& good luck with your book!!

wow, this was incredible! :-o
great job, really one of the best stories i've ever read on fanfiction! :D

Oh my god, oh my god that the best thing I've ever read! It was beautiful, especially the ending (which, has made be cried; it was sad and happy at the same time) From the beginning I was into the plot and couldn't wait for more! It was wonderful.

well, what's left to say except of: thanks.
if your book is written like this i'm sure it gets published

and the kind of happy ending made me happy too XD
it's still South Park, which means they're going to see each other again in hell

You didn't make me completely cry but I definitely teared up when Kyle called Stan a tool to his face... This story is definitely one of if not the best I've read.

Right now I really want to kick Kyle in a very sensitive spot (and I don't mean his heart). He made Stan cry! Kyle, what the HELL happened to you?
continue this soon. Please.

OH NOES!

WHY? WHY ? WHY?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?

Kyle - wat happened to you? wat happened wat happene?!?!?!?!?

Oh God if this story doesnt update their will be DIRE consequences on ur behalf!
PLEASE!

UPDATE PLEASE! Be nice! its christmas afterall!

*sniff* WHY?! doesnt anyone ever learn from thier mistakes?!?!?

The same thing happened in WW1! wen they forgot to synchronise their watches! WHY?

hoping that u'll update soon to save me the job of torturing you-

omg.u.killed.kenny (oo)

Heh, Operation Jericho made me grin for reasons of my own. But aside from my ramblings, I've enjoyed the last few chapters very much (even though I'm a lousy reviewer). It made more sense that Ike was killed in the way he was rather than in the cold-blooded betrayal that I had anticipated. And throughout there was very much a sense of the Rebels being overwhelmed by the odds and refusing to quit - and the Arbiters not being able to trust their leaders or each other. Yech, I don't know which situation would be worse.

I couldn't help feeling sorry for Stan, even while I was wishing for him to grow a backbone and stand up to Kyle. It was pretty obvious that Kyle was the justification for what he did and had done and the flashes of the old Kyle were only feeding his hope - still, that betrayal was harsh. And there was a sense that not only would Kyle do it again in a hearbeat, Stan would give him the oppertunity to. Oh, and Rebel Kenny rules. Just thought I'd add that!

Only one more chapter? Damn. Still, I'm looking forward to it and have loved this story so far. The only thing (and it is a tiny thing!) I found wrong was a mis-spelling in chapter 6 during the struggle between Ike and Kyle - it's "choked" not "chocked". Hope you can have the next chapter up soon!