Good, nice, sweet chapter! I like it!

I just read this story again and thought I'd tell you, that I love it. It is - along with its sequels and that one story called 'snapshots', I think - my favourite story in this fandom. I like just about everything about it - especially your original characters.
I've particularly fallen in love with Bali Tiro who's among the best original characters I've come across so far.

I love this story so much, but the link is broken or else I'm just not smart enough to work it. I would so love to read its sequel and find out about Obi-Wan and Bali's bond. It seems like Anakin is going to fall and I would like to see how Qui-Gon deals with that. Lovely story.

I believe this is the end (even if it doesn't say completed on this story). I'm going to find the others that I remember seeing.

I like your story but I don't like Bali. Qui-Gon is being an ** as usual, and Anakin is a clever little bastard, so props to you for their characterization. Obi-Wan kicks **.

Awesome story! A very realistic portrayal of what might had been if Qui-Gon survived. Again, good job. :)

/me shoots Qui-Gon.

Bastard.

Very, very nice. I love that version of the character, much better done than the canon ones.

of course i am just in the first chapter, and may still be very disappointed XD

Just a quick spelling error: The word 'to' was spelled as 'too' about four or five times in this chapter alone. Not that big of a deal, thought I just mention it to you.

i really love it. by the way, does that blue skinned Twi'lek girl survive? i want her to so she can keep on harrassing and kissing up to Obi-Wan! um...iwas doing this fanfic on after the batle of Naboo, and Qui-Gon was alive and took Anakin as his Padawan. Could I please base it off of your stories about Bali Tiro, Obi-Wan, and everyone else? if it's okay with you of course. please answer.

I love how you had Qui-Gon desert Obi-Wan in favor of Anakin, and then had Obi-Wan be protected and guided by the Council. I think that Qui-Gon would have actually done that, if he hadn't died. LOVED IT!

What a great story! I loved the idea that Qui-Gon survived, yet there was tension between him and Obi-Wan. Masterfully written. Now, the sequel!

How did Obiwan betray Quigon, I don't think I am understanding this story, but it is very interesting

why do Obiwan and Quigon notlike each other? but anywhoo great story so far really interesting

I just found this story!! excellent, I loved every page, and wished for more. I am moving on to the next part. Your writing is always awesome!
Thank you for the last wonderful 5 days of reading I could not stop, I was addicted to this story.