I like the certainty of Anakin in his righteousness because he doesn't have the whole story.

It's amazing the way the Obi-Wan avoids Qui-Gon the more his life focuses on him.

"We've just grown apart." I loved this line and how gullible Anakin still is despite the already present traces of the darkside.

The change in Obi-Wan is simply chilling.

I hope you haven't abandoned this story and will update soon!

hey,

I realize that it has been several years since you began this story but i was hoping to drop a review anyway. I think the story is very interesting and made it to the last chapter within a couple of hours. The last chapter was confusing though. I was wondering if i could sweet talk you into finishing it? thanks

This is breaking my heart...Obi-Wan so lonely and depressed. I'm assuming the reason for the breach between them will be explained later? So sad...

Wow. Hi, your stories have come highly recommended to me from several other people, so I decided to look you up on both forums and read your stories.

What a beginning on this one..wow...so emotional with hurt, pain, emptiness, escape. I look forward to reading more.

Obi's Mom

Just rereading this story for the somethingth time. Still love it so much. I can't believe it's almost been out for 10 years.

Happy anniversary AUP!

Good, nice, sweet chapter! I like it!

I just read this story again and thought I'd tell you, that I love it. It is - along with its sequels and that one story called 'snapshots', I think - my favourite story in this fandom. I like just about everything about it - especially your original characters.

I've particularly fallen in love with Bali Tiro who's among the best original characters I've come across so far.

I love this story so much, but the link is broken or else I'm just not smart enough to work it. I would so love to read its sequel and find out about Obi-Wan and Bali's bond. It seems like Anakin is going to fall and I would like to see how Qui-Gon deals with that. Lovely story.

I believe this is the end (even if it doesn't say completed on this story). I'm going to find the others that I remember seeing.

I like your story but I don't like Bali. Qui-Gon is being an ass as usual, and Anakin is a clever little bastard, so props to you for their characterization. Obi-Wan kicks ass.

Awesome story! A very realistic portrayal of what might had been if Qui-Gon survived. Again, good job. :)