Oh god. This was just amazing. I will try for coherence, but I can't promise you anything. :)

Love this line: "Dark auburn strands clump together over your eyes, pixelated and chunky like you hailed from one of your video games." Yes. I just love that image for some reason.

My favorite part (one of many) is when Mello talks about seeing Matt's lifeline on his palm. So heart-breakingly beautiful and sad.

When I saw the words "I'm driving and clutching the wheel and I can't even breathe" and then "I need you...But this time you can't hear me" I knew exactly what was going on. No matter how many times I read the manga, or read fics pertaining to their deaths, my heart just hurts. But this made me cry. Such raw, intense, powerful yearning and regret. Thankfully, Mello doesn't have much time left...he needs to be put out of his misery! :(

Going in my favorites.

So heart breaking, my God, so much pain...Why?

Hey there, SlvrSoleAlchmst1-ator... (the usual nickname which popped into my head just doesn't have the same ring with your penname... >.

Christ, you know it only just occured to me that I take things way too seriously? Especially from you. I'm really sorry about last night, you have no idea. Not just for making you listen to my overdramatic ideas and stupid fantasies, but because afterwards I felt like I had killed something. I was really depressed. I didn't wake up until 2:30pm today. TWO THIRTY. At least I got up feeling well rested.

ANYWAY, over-intesity aside, I'm looking at the last line of your fic. In the manga, I never really felt like Mello regretted anything that had happened, but the way that you used the scene to lead up to Mello's line made his feelings suddenly very real. Maybe it wasn't exactly regret that he felt at the moment that he found out, but longing. He wishes that he had done more, that there was more time between when he admitted his feelings for Matt to himself and their deaths. It's really hitting me now that Mello felt something when Matt died, something intense.

Also, I finally listened to the song, and I enjoyed it. It was more upbeat than I had imagined, so I'm glad I didn't listen to it before reading the fic. And for the record, I definitely don't think that only what you wrote in London is any good. Because, you wanna know a secret? When I first started reading your fics, ('Breathe' and 'Impossible Mello,' I believe, in that order) back at the end of 11th grade, I crossed my legs and smirked and thought to myself, "Whoever this author is, wherever he or she is, I wanna go there and seduce her."

;)

Wow. I love the way you wrote Mello. This was truly tragic, and it also introduced me to a wonderful song. Very good job

Oh, man. I'm so glad I'm not the only one who thought of Matt and Mello during that song.
I loved it! It was so melancholy, and captured the song perfectly, twisting it up into a wonderful, angsty mess with our favorite orphans. ...love. Great job.