Awesome! I loved the story. Not only was there a great plot & engaging characters but it was really well written to boot. Keep it up!

Ashmerlin

Ps I now have a major case of talent envy - LOL

Magnifico!

My only small complaint was that I would have like a better transition from the party to the bedroom. It felt as though everyone saw them leave together ...

Otherwise a well-written one shot with a fabulous ending :)

*le sigh*

What a happy little story!

*looks at "add author to favorites" button."

Check! ;-)

"Watching him, I pondered how one got to be a piece of toast in Edward Cullen’s mouth."

I love it!

aw. juicy lemon after pissy little fights and lots of taunting. and then to top it all off.u throw in some gooey fluff and u have the perfect christmas story.:-D

Great story!

YES! pixie on crack, tiny Nazi Christmas elf sister? those are perfect. my brother is looking at me like i'm the crack head but wutever. that was so funny. you guys did a great job. its hard to believe that you guys didn't get in, but i'm pretty sure you were a runner up. :)

Loved it! Awesome job..

ooh...great job!

wow, well done! I'm still not used to these AH stories, but you did a great job showing Edward and Bella's characters. I imagine if Edward was human he would be something of a know it all as well. :)

Oh. My. Wow. I am in love with this story!

Aw so sweet and hot and lemony and all good!

Yes.

I approve.

More, pleaseandthankyou.

You ladies slay me, but that was to be expected.

oops i gotta stop hitting submit before I'm done with the review xD

“Shit Alice, I was just looking for the….” I reached, trying to come up with an excuse for not setting out the 435 million votive candles she had assigned me to place around the house.

My mother must have placed it there, to catch my father. Was she sixteen?

- haha.. I just love his thoughts and the way he was scared of Alice the Christmas Nazi xD

that was cute... loved how everything was built up.. and the underlying tension...,