Hey, I just want you to know that I totally love this. I can so believe this. Its an amazing idea, and I would really enjoy reading more of this. Maybe a next encounter or something. Pretty Pretty Please...

Holy fuck this was amazing! You actually made me a fan of this unique pair!

Wow. So I would say this story's amazing, but that'd be a HUGE understatement. It's a pairing that very few write about, but I think it has so potential.

Yours is just unbelievable explosive (in more ways than one), and it's everything I'd every hope for.

I especially love the dynamics in this story. For Light meeting Mello, I can see him with his cool, calm mask (as shown), but also that arrogant, god complex and the I'm not afraid to take action and BAM like I said earlier, that damn delectable and sexy explosive clash.

Love the interactions and witty replies between the two. Fantastic fighting and sex haha. My eyes were scanning at a faster pace in the beginning (eager to read what's next), then slowed down to savor the action.

Another thing is that everything flows very nicely, able to make me really imagine what's going on. Great imagery!

Thank you for writing this amazing story. I think I will be pretty content for a while just thinking back to this.

Terrible. OOC and GOOD beta needed.

wow, i really liked this. very nice and graphic too hehe.

i also appreciate the fact that you're one of the few that uphold proper spelling, grammar, and punctuation. bravo :)

OHMY. so beautiful. love it,

HA This was perhaps the most gangsta/kick ass thing i have read in ages, please if possible write a sequal.

Omg. I would write this whole review in caps, but that might look crazy so I'll restrain myself. BUT IT'S SOO AMAZING! AH.

Okay. Absolutely amazingg :D :D You almost never see a MelloxLight paring and this is so well written too! Especially the "I've come to kidnap you" fused in with lots and lots of violence and some sex:) haha I love it. SO much. Oh, goodness. The witty humor/comebacks were amazing too! I love the Mello having an advantage over Light/dominating him. Especially with being in that sort of business, he would have that advantage over Light. Wo for taking advantage of him! ahaha or something like that.

LOVEE YOUR STORY. :D Absolutely amazing:D

Wow... wow, I think I have a lady-boner... okay that makes me sound strange ' but that was amazingly well written, love it!

This was absolutely perfect. Raito needs to get beat up and screwed by genius pseudo-Ls ALL THE TIME

Fuck yes. Best Christmas present ever, even if it was written for someone else last year.

I'm too tired to leave a real review, but DAMN, even if Mello/Light wasn't my OTP, I'd still love this.

That was so hot!

Light and Mello might be my new fav pairing... Light got what he deserved! Blood everywhere... God, sexy... Sexy, violent sex. I LOVED IT!

FML...that was so hot. Dude, amazing. LOL. I love the...

Wah. Mello *melts* You've made me a Mello/Light shipper, holy shit. You write amazing-ly. :P

...and *this* is the sort of fun that just isn't possible with more "conventional" DN pairings. :D

The best fic I read that includes this kind of actions hehe

But now...

I didnt get if Light, liked or he was raped in some parts or he was just I dont know... hysterical? XD