Aw. I love this.

Amazing story. Keep it coming, please and thank you!

I am loving this story way too much. Thank you!

Another stirling example of good, solid writing. I really enjoy your style. You write the emotional stuff really well, you dig into the character psyche and you make it feel real to the reader.

Well done!

Is this story done or are you going to continue? I have to say that I read fanfiction since X files days and I think you are one of the best fanfictions writers I ever read. Seriously. The dalogs are so realistic.

I love your story. keep going

Ah! So cute! I love Lexie and Mark. They're my absolute favorite, but this is my first entrance into Grey's Anatomy fanfiction and I can't say I'm complaining! It's perfect and awesome and a you have a great grasp of how their awkward beginning would play out past the whole "Teach me" thing. And their personalities--! Truly, I love the way you write them. Any chance on getting more? ;)

'...The answer was in his kiss.' That just reminded me of the Betty Everett song ( a more recent version was done by song, and it's actually pretty good, in my opinion)"It's In His Kiss".

Great...now I'm gonna think of them every time I hear that song:)

Can't wait to see what happens next!

You're...AWESOME!

I thought for sure she WAS gonna say his name at the end of the chpater, tho.

LOVED IT!

I forgive you. I loved this chapter anyway.:)

“Fine. First promise not to laugh.”

“No.”


You write Mark so well, he would totally say that.:)


such a sweet chapter!

“You know why I came over and I know you know why I came over. I had an itch and you had—you had—” Here she faltered and gestured aimlessly with her hand. She had every intention of stopping, but then he smirked at her, as if he just knew little Lexie Grey couldn’t bring herself to go there. Then it became about pride. And shock value. “A dick.”



...I've been drinking ginger ale while reading this story, but luckily,I wasn't drinking it while reading that part, cuz I probably would've laughed so hard that I'd spit it out.:P

You're an awesome writer! And I'm SO glad you chose to write for this couple!

Interesting how SHE was the one who came to HIS hotel room, and now she's annoyed with him...no, actually, that probably makes sense...it is Mark, after all.:P

Great story!

just found this story. and oh my goodness it was so good!
i love how, even in the smallest of moves or changes in words and actions, you describe how they play out.

definitely a story i will go back and read in the future!

brilliant beautiful story

:) pity its over :(