 arbitraryink 2008-12-13 . chapter 1Aw :) Throughout this whole thing, I was a little apprehensive that it would have a very sad ending, but I'm pleased with the cheery turnout. Here's hoping that Taylor responds with all her heart soon!
A lovely read, and I hope to see more soon!
- Jess |
 singyourmelody 2008-12-13 . chapter 1excellent. very realistic and the characters are portrayed well. i didn't really like taylor's actions this past week. matt's finally ready to make the jump and she's all weird and frigid? seemed somewhat out of place. and then getting seal to privately serenade matt? corny! pu-lease! but you redeemed that story line with this story. :) great job. i always love your eli stone fics, but my favorite eli stone couple (by far) is eli and maggie, so i think you should write more of those. :) please? with sugar on top? keep up the good work! |