Quite beautiful and very realistic. Wonderfully done. Thank you.

This is a cute little fic, and I really took the message to heart, and can completely relate to it. =] Great job.

Love this! I love how you incorporate the quotes.
And the epitaph for her mum is perfect =D

aww, that was cute, i can imagine Luna doing that ;P keep it up!

verry sweet, good job! =D

That was an interesting read. I liked the part about everyone being a child at heart. If you let that go, what fun will you have in life?

Very sweet, I liked it.

I think Luna's perfectly in character!! Short and sweet =D

I agree with you when you say Luna's character was a bit off. I don't know what it was, but I didn't really feel her there. I liked the concept and I liked your choice of quotes, however, so good job with concept! :)

Yeah, Luna was a little teeny tiny bit OOC. But this is a really pretty piece. I especailly liked the "acknowledging each and every soul" thing. Very good.

That was a nice dedication to Luna, I liked that.

This was really sweet! I love that Luna seems so like a child when visiting her mother, possibly what she was like when she was younger and her mum was still alive. Love the first quote too =D

At the start, I think it should be 'as it did every evening' instead of 'does', and you missed an L on filled.

Good job!

I loved it. That was wonderful ^^ So Luna like ^^ The Peter pan quote came exatclyat a good time and doesnt sound strange nor anything. I really loved it!

honestly, i think you captured luna's character very well! i can totally see her doing that. luna is one of my favorite characters in the books. i do think everyone is a child at heart and luna shows it well! i liked it a lot! =)

I don't think Luna was a little a out of character. This is very cute and its true the world would be better if we all let out are childish side.