I think Lionblaze was right to tell leafpool that heathertail was having his kits and that she was going to raise them in Windclan. No wonder why he was looking longingly at Wispkit and Ashenkit-he knows that he will never be able to play with his own kits


The story of starclaw was really cool and interesting. I think that Rosetail was descended from lightningtalon because like the story said lightingtalon, heard the story from starclaw before he killed him and then told flowerpath, his mate. she told it to her kits who only told their kits and so on

That must stink for Ravenpaw. He wanted to go see firestar but the only thing he could do was pay the great former leader his respects before heading back to skyclan

Ahh. Maybe the twolegs leaving the horseplace and taking floss and smokey with them was sign that Skyclan belonged with the clans

Wow, I just read this story in once go, and it was great!
~Icy

Whoa, I can't believe I didn't review sooner...heh heh.

Overall, I always thought this story was incredibly unique and thoroughly crafted from the use of an equally unique mind. And, judging by the way you write, you definitely have that sense of a natural-born author, don't you agree?

I found the ending somewhat surprising, but definitely not a disappointment in the slightest bit. It was interesting nonetheless. The death of the Three was also interesting since, in many fics submitted on this site, they often keep the protagonists alive. The fact that you killed them was a different and respected idea.

I absolutely LOVE the last line: "It is inevitable, and often a relief. Yet, it is sad, for during the cruel season, cats may die."

EXCELLENT!

Sincerely~Duskblood

:( i wanted mousexholly lionxheather and jayxcinder to work, its really sad that they died though, they were a big part. Well thx for the great story!
R&R mine.

Sincerely,
Just Blitz

Aw that chapter was so sad. :( But still your story was really good. Keep up the awsome work.

why did you kill them! why!

I suppose it makes it a little better...*sniff*
Can't wait for Warning! X)
Luv,
Lightkit

Aw! I luv'd the epilouge! Waiting eagerly for the next book!

the ending was really good but so sad! I nearly cried! Hope you start and finish the next one quickly! You are awesome at writing! But again I have questions. How did Sol Bring the Darkclan cats back to life? Is he that powerful? Also, isn't Lionblaze a might warrior? How could Sol defeat him? and why so many breaking necks? Isn't there other ways to kill cats? Thats all. May Starclan be with you~

the ending was really sad...*sob*...but i cant wait for voices of the stars!

GREAT EPILOGUE! Loved the 'cruel season' quote. FRKN awesome.
I liked the sneak peek.
IT WAS A FABULOUS STORY! =)

Wow that was a good ending. I cant wait until 'Voice of the Stars' please post it soon.

WOW! This was absolutely amazing and the ending was a real tear starter! Thank you so much for writing this wonderful story! :)