I love it when people care to see Ari as more then a monster.
Love it even more when they write so beautifully.
I'm tearing up write now. So touching.

Wow. Very well written and very moving. It's a side of Ari that most people wouldn't care to look for, but you did a very good job portraying it and making me believe it.

You've captured Ari so perfectly! *instant favourite*

That was a really great story-you capture Ari's prsonality perfectly.Great job.:)

Very powerful. You did an excellent job fleshing out Ari. I love stories like this, the ones that successfully provide a glimpse of a character's thoughts/motivations. Thank you!

Very well written! Brilliant!

Oh that was good. I've never even entertained the thought that Ari could be such a tragic character that I could sympathize with but you made it happen. It would be nice to think that Ari wasn't truly a monster through and through but who knows.

:O

Beautiful...

~IGC t DM+