I'm not sure Ari could have planned this ... But I'm convinced that he cared a lot for Ziva.

I really liked this story, you wrote Ari's feelings very well.

Thank you

Hello!

this oneshot is... intriguing. But I love that you make it possible that Ari is not that much of a bastard, and that he did what he did with some kind of justice sense, though a twisted one...

Thanks for writing this!

Hallolo

AW! I love how Ari planned all this. UPDATE SOON! :)

I love it when people care to see Ari as more then a monster.

Love it even more when they write so beautifully.

I'm tearing up write now. So touching.

Wow. Very well written and very moving. It's a side of Ari that most people wouldn't care to look for, but you did a very good job portraying it and making me believe it.

You've captured Ari so perfectly! *instant favourite*

That was a really great story-you capture Ari's prsonality job.:)

Very powerful. You did an excellent job fleshing out Ari. I love stories like this, the ones that successfully provide a glimpse of a character's thoughts/motivations. Thank you!

Very well written! Brilliant!

Oh that was good. I've never even entertained the thought that Ari could be such a tragic character that I could sympathize with but you made it happen. It would be nice to think that Ari wasn't truly a monster through and through but who knows.

:O

Beautiful...

IGC t DM