"That's one of the (very few, I might add) problems with being in love with Jasper. Sure, he's happy when I'm happy, but it totally sucks to have PMS when your boyfriend's just as bummed out as you are.

And demanding to watch Titanic again."

Wow, just, um... wow... :)

And "I'm not ready to be anyone's fiancée! I told myself as I splashed cold water over my face. Hell, I'm not even old enough to buy liquor!"

Seriously, I didn't know if it was possible, but this one is even better than the first.

-Princess-

good

All right, so Dad's officially kicking me off the computer now - and I was wrong with my vision of 2.7 minutes, it was really 2.8 or something like that :P But so far I'm looking forward to reading the rest of Deep South tomorrow. After school. And homework. And dance. And dinner. Maybe I'll end up having to read it the day after tomorrow. But yeah. Also, I'd like to mention again that I think you're an awesome writer!

AW

ok so i know these have been written for a while and i hate to always comment on old stuff...but i know i love it when i get reviews no matter how late so...

i love this story...and this version of Alice!

you officially rock right now haha!

i also love how you have such a good backstory! there are no holes where you cant explain stuff...like the last q&a on here...i love that! and you!

-InLoveWith2Edwards

Now this chapter was HILARIOUS! XD

This is only the preface, and I've already fallen in the love with your story! Wonderful details, and a flow of words that pulled me in from the first sentence.

I adore the last part. 'One last shattering chime' - it's so poetic!

Shadow

Might I day, I LOVED the Into the Wild reference.

These past chapters have been poetic. 33

That was a great chapter, and I don't usually review until I reach the end of a story (if the story is finished) but one thing was bugging me... it's Feliz Cumpleaños. I had that drilled into my head by my sadistic spanish teacher for 40 minutes. And I am not exaggerating, at all.

-jess

Yeah, i did. but it was too soon.

and then jasper said something about butter yellow and there is NO WAY alice would EVER get married in butter yellow.

ew.

BAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA.

i do love it. the little jokes about twilight. it makes me laugh :)

:'O

sorry to hear about your friend. it must have been really hard.

and this chapter! wow! as beautiful as the one in new moon.

except with alice. amazing :)

love that she has conversations like that in her head. so much more amusing than bella's

:'O

is it bad that i cried even though i knew it was going to happen?

AH!

she's talking about his scars isn't he?

ooh, if i was a vampire, i would burn her myself *evil eyes*