An interesting take. I really liked how you made Snape's body true to cannon. Snape as unattractive as ever yet still stirring those feelings in harry. very well done, and hot!

I like it!!
It's great!!

I like this story! (Haven't read the companion piece, though, sorry!) My favorite part of this story is actually...how you kept Snape his ugly self. A lot of people change him into this suddenly SEXY man once he's naked. I really enjoyed your story (keeping Snape in character and yet, softening him to Harry.) Wonderful! :D

M totally hot. Talk about persistent Harry, but hey it was worth it in the end! Great job =]

i'll try to finish another time

Uhm, well I am a sucker for a kind of softer Severus but this will do nicely as well

On a different note, you do realize how much I adore you now, right? Thank you so much for delivering

I really like it ^^;