That was deep. I have to hand it to you, you can definitely write the best scenerios well. Aw man, I wish I read the prequel first. Ah well, this fic was on a perfect line between angst and friendship, but omg, if you wrote pure angst, now that would be a greatest fic for me!

You are so good at this first kill business. This was really believable and I like the character relationships because I feel like they hold true to manga, to what they will eventually get to anyway. I liked this a lot and I like how Yamamoto knows how to say what's needed when it's important for Gokudera to understand.

I loved this; I've read a lot of "first kills" and none of them have ever been as artfully done as this one. Thinking about it, didn't Reborn call Yamamoto the perfect assassin? I think he really does fit that description. You did a great job.

Breathtaking. From the beginning to the end, I was absorbed within the text. Everything was depicted in a very believable way, and I could almost see this actually happening in the manga/ anime. The ending made me snicker and in a nutshell, I absolutely loved this. So *favorites*

I like it. I thought both Gokudera and Yamamoto were fairly in character, and I can picture this happening. Your writing itself is also pretty good.