Wonderful story! I loved the end but maybe you could continue it?I would love to read more.

...HAWT...deep (no pun intended)...all around...*epic gai pose* AWESOME!

Wow... very nicely done.

AWW! ::hugs orochi:: I knew you had a heart!
::dies of stab wounds. or snakebite::
I love this story. I'm favoriting it... see? I'm doing it right now. Clicky Clicky...

HOLY **! oops, sorry about the language... BUT DID OROCHIMARU JUST SUB! FOR KABUTO! WILLINGLY?! That was amazingly hot... I think you just convinced me to like OroKabuto... at least this kind. Whew... bout shocked me to death...

Wow.
I love this chapter. The idea of Kabuto being jealous of kimimaro was a novel one for me. I was shocked at how much sense it made. I love Kabuto's straightforwardness. "Because I love you" how great. Orochi probably had a wonderful time processing that bit of info... Great chapter!

Squee! I liked this a lot! The first chapter was amazing, the second was great, and this one I felt was, I dunno, the weakest of the three, but even so it was still good. What more can I say? Loved it.

Aw so great of a story I really loved it even with the OCC ness

Wow - just wow! "For all the time he had known him, Orochimaru had assumed that he was the strong one" what a lovely fic that distills Oro/Kabu down to its very essence.

Wow! superb love the ending... I bet Kabuto did hear him he was wise enough not to disturb the atmosphere...

arigato

OMG so fck hot... Kabuto always look manly and Orochimaru very feminen but I actually could never picture Kabuto as the seme since Orochimaru is such a psychotic-sadist.

arigato

Wow! excellent description and in my opinion in character... I just love Kabuto and Orochimaru... Of course my first love is Sasuke and Naruto but talking on the evil side Kabuto and Orochimaru are my #1.

Arigato,

okay. I LOVE this story. Especially chapter one! You wrote it beautifully and have turned me into a full orokabu fan! I wasn't sure about what to think of this pairing before I read this but now I realize that it = love! XD

aw, that's so sweet! its good to know that orokabu can have fuzzy moments, too. loved it, totally.

I loved these two extra parts, especially 'chemistry'. Your language and descriptions are gorgeous! :)