Brilliant! I loved it, and I bow to you. Great story idea, very well executed!

Fantastic story! Loved the mix of mythology, romance and action. I really can't complain about lack of ship in this one! Crowned with a baby... perfect!

this was a lovely ending to such a lovely story. the soup made me laugh though, beer not salt...wonder if it would make it taste good..nah think I shall pass on that experiment.

this was a nice finish for the evil to be overthrown by the good. hope there is a final bit to this story

Brilliant, I enjoyed this but I was a little disappointed it ended so rapidly. Chapter 11, the epilogue, was excellent. I just felt a little more time given to the actual battle would have been better. To me it appeared to be a little rushed. Apart from that I thoroughly enjoyed Jack O'Neill and the Seven Fairies...thanks.

A delightful story. Merry Christmas!

Aw.

Very sweet ending. :D I enjoyed reading this story. :)

Oh. I was not expecting the Daniel twist with the gun. Nice one!

Great story with a lovely Sam & Jack ending. Hope you're doing okay. Take care and have a wonderful holiday. Looking forward to your next story and maybe an addition to Aftershocks. Always enjoy reading this continuing story with your insight into each new chapter.

great story! I love this chapter, it's so sweet. And the beer in the soup- Heh :D

are you going to contuie this story when they have the baby?
michelle

I loved the Arthurian mythology and a nice happy ending.

Aw! Sweet ending to a good story. Thank you for sharing it. And I have to compliment you by wishing it had been longer.

Nice Epilogue. Felt bad for poor Sam in the beginning, good reaction from Jack though. Nice. Just nice. Early Merry Christmas