omg i cant believ bloody helen o i would so love to give her a damn good kicking

yay i like that :)

It's very different to all the others primeval fanfic I have seen but that what I like about it.
cant wait for more

awesome!

i love aliens, and connor is all 'itoldyousoish' very sweet.

Well update soon please

omg mint stori n yeah in britain were upto like episode 8/9 9 ithink 2morro but omg ur soo gunna love this series well i have :) XD

Interesting. That is all I will say on the matter.

since connor was inspired by star wars, i feel perfectly justfied in using a very common quote from said films. i have a bad feeling about this.

I like it, it's very Connor keep it up I want to know if COnnor's theory works or not.