Love it! You really have Liz's voice down perfectly, and the whole angsty-self analysis thing is absolutely spot on. I liked the "French" comment, too, sounds just like something Jack might actually have said. :D Brilliant.

GREAT stream of consciousness. You've nailed Liz and Jack's voices, and the transition from Liz to Jack's point of view worked well. A pleasure to read. Thank you for posting!

this was really really very good, and i think you express Liz in a way that isjust very originally Liz, if you get what I mean. It's written in a way that is so human, which makes it really beautiful. keep writing!
Love,
Lady Merlin

haha that was awesome! Great job!

Excellent, really... just excellent! You really have a terrific grasp of Liz & Jack's relationship! Would love to see more of this story!

LOL. Keeping her bra on seems like a very Liz Lemon thing to do.