Well done!:)

Very good job. It was funny and interesting.

this was great! good job, you do so well with them! (:

Haha, oh Liz and her donuts. She would so definitely be turned on by Jack eating a donut. I loved this. Absolutely perfect as far as the thoughts going through Liz's mind. Brilliant story!

lol, cool story.
I love Liz and Jack! xD
and there little moments.

Hahaha.
Donuts are total turn ons.
:D

LOL! Very nice! I think you've managed to capture Liz's voice extremely well - now I'd love to see you write a story from Jack's pov. Well done!

haha. nice job.
and weird question/observation: that dying your hair purple and bleaching it thing, any chance you got that from gilmore girls? if not, don't mind me. if so, kudos to you! =]

Real good story!