Aww! BAD ZACK! NO COOKIE!

Want more.

That's all ? Too bad, it looked promising. But I know what it is not to continue a fanfic, so I can't really criticize...

Heidegger ? Agh, the horror ! Wanna wash my brain of that image ! T_T

And go Scarlet ! (In the game she is a f*ing bitch, but in this story I like her ; maybe because she wakes up my feminist instincts)

*pouts* you still havn't updated? It's been AGES! *bounces in chair* I waznna know what happens! And the news about ALHR is great! Twig's nice, isn't she? she said I could put it on my site too. But, no offense or anything,but your story is completly out of cannon with ALHR... unless it's set after the game, and Tifa was gone... but then you still had Hojo... basically, I can't see how that would work. Of course, knowing me, you actually said something completly different and I just read it wrong. Ah, well. If I did, ignore the above. Anyways, I want some Cloud! And hopefully, some 'Seph comes to his senses and stops Zack from leaving'. Hey, i've got it! Seph can go to tell Zack about the name for the baby, completly fogetting that he told Zack that he was fired! That would work, wouldn't it? Anyway, I hope you update soon!

Wow this is interesting and very sad. Yet at the same time really funny. Please update!

Aw::sniff:: damnit...:sniff: wha'did I say bout not making this angsty...::SNIFF:: now I have to go beat up Zach... ::Sniff: he'd better come back and Fight to get Seph-sama to listen to his (profuse and numerous) appologies as well as major gift hunting... or else cloud-kun is always waiting in the sidelines...am I right? ::plots to steal ps1 and play FF again...:: ::sniff::

OK... the M-preger in me is doing backflips and waving pom-poms... the video-gamer in me just died laughing and I want to feed sephy ben and jerrys... badly

Day_um girl! Kickass doesn't dent this! lol not serrious and keep it that way! fluff and waffy sillyness in this are great, please don't stop!

EVIL MOMMY SEPH! lmao! i love low-blow

heheeheheheheheh...hahahahahhaha...HEHEHEHEHE...HAHAHAHAHA! *falls out of chair*

are you sure its mine? lmao! finish it!

Oh My GAWD! That is HILARIOUS! *wipes a tear from her eyes* I love it! It's cool, brilliant, fantabulous, amazing, spectacular...okay, it's good. I love it! Carry on, pweese? I'll be your bwest fwend! *cringes* okay that was bad... It's good and funny. I'd like to see it continued!

-Sephiroth: Me too! I love it!

Shut up, Seph.

-Sephiroth: Hmph. Fine. *stomps out of Lj's head*

O.o oookay...

Lj

Argh, Zack can be so brainless at times. -_-* But anyway, the kudos to Twig was that theory of Hojo's that the baby might turn out to be a monster, right? By the way, love the chapter title for chapter four. Sephy doesn't like those cherry nougat chocolates either, huh? _ Guy after my own heart.

I am really, really, REALLY liking this. Write chapter five soon, okay? Oh, and is Cloud going to make an appearance in this? He was mentioned a couple times, but I got the impression that he hasn't joined in on the fun with Sephy and Zack yet.

LOL! very original. Write more, or else. Sephy with morning sickness...hysterical. Can it be a girl? Oh, Zack. Poor, poor doomed Zack.

Hellllooo! :):) Please write more soon, but don't rush, nothing good ever comes out *fake serious look* :

Crono: When I read the title I thought it was about me.

Magus: we all hate yaoi.

Vegeta: you're gonna die now.