I liked to know what happens. Please finish the story. It is a good one.

Hi. I really like your fic. Plz, PLZ continue. I really want to know what happens. Bye

you can't end it there! what happens to her? you CAN'T leave it there!

You can't end it there! There's way too many strings left untied. You're letting the bad guy win! Please, please continue!

i think your story is going great. i just hope that since darkskies was able to protect her grams, that wildwing will be able to protect mal. i love wing and mal pairings. i hope they hook it up in the end.

You continue to intrigue. I like how you're developing the characters, especially the dilemma you've got Wildwing in. Keep going.

Finish please? :)

Thanks Candygirl for bringing that to my attention, I didn't even realize I was doing it. Thank you all for your feedback, especially since it's all been so positive. Thanks again! Ducks Rock!

cooooool... (but if Mallory's family all have cool names, why doesn't she?) Not important... this is an intriguing story. Can't wait to see where it goes. Oh, and please keep an eye on your tenses, you shift back and forth like nobody's business.

GREAT! Please, please, please, please, please continue this story!

Ty: *staring at screen in shock*

Puppymon: Well this is interesting! I hope you continue soon. and yes peeps Ty is back now! She'll get her stories updated ASASOOS!

Ty: *still in shock*

Puppymon: As in As Soon as She's out of shock.

Ty: *collapses*

Puppymon: -_-

Wow! I'm loving this! Great plot, great use of characters! You've got my attention! Please continue! The conflict between Wing and Mal is heart stopping and the fact that Mal is an untrained sorceress is awesome. I can't wait to see where you go with this!

pretty good so far.