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firelarc
2009-06-01 . chapter 4
wow! this is awsome. cant wait to read more. it is like all the chapters so far are cliff hanger or a page turner.
edward455
2009-03-20 . chapter 4
what the h@#^ is going on here plus this is just crpeey you need to explain more in this story 4 chapters of bull$#!(
xEternalPainx
2009-03-19 . chapter 4
Hey! Finally another chapter. I was wondering if you were gonna update again or not. Things are just as weird as before oO; I hope you explain what's going on soon!
Darev
2009-03-18 . chapter 4
Hm...okay. I would like to know just what the hell is going on myself. Is Kim some sort of robot or something else entirely? Will they go on the run and if so from whom? Something to keep me coming back, I suppose.

~Darev
List of Romantics
2009-03-15 . chapter 4
Booty Sweat... Bust-A-Nut... I get it now. I finally saw Tropic Thunder: HILARIOUS! Robert Downey Jr. MADE that movie, and should have won the Oscar for his work. Jack Black was good as well.

Oh, it looks like Kimmie had her density altered, that or she's gained super powers. VERY peculiar.

And what are you doing starting another story when Two Gravities has YET to be updated!? Huh!?

Good Stuff.
List of Romantics
2009-01-09 . chapter 3
"Who the hell would want to drink something called Booty Sweat?"

Try Japan, they got all kinds of weird here. Or High School. It sounds like THE drink for teens everywhere. Me? Once you've had the real thing, nothing from a can will do (kidding).

It appears like Kimmie was killed on a mission then, but why hide the fact she survived or faked her death?

In time, all shall be revealed. I hope.

(and I'm still drooling over Shego in a black bikini ;-)
List of Romantics
2009-01-09 . chapter 2
Shego... Black B-Bikini...? *Drools* Were I a puppy, I'd be waggin' my tail right about now ;-)

Did she fake her death to retire (a little too extreme) or for some other reason?
List of Romantics
2009-01-09 . chapter 1
Oh, Sh*t!

And Pho is yummy!
momomago
2009-01-04 . chapter 3
WHAT THE HECK!
i just nee4d to read more, to know what happen, what is going to happen next >.< Kim's dead? and then a Doppelganger? >.< i need some answers >.<
very well written and great idea...
hope you keep going...
xEternalPainx
2008-12-20 . chapter 3
Aww... that's so sad. I wonder how Kim died. I wonder if someone will catch Shego in the house, and if they're going to turn her in or let her stay. Can't wait for next update!
xx Dark Angel Baby xx
2008-12-18 . chapter 3
That was great please update soon! Thanks!!
Alcandre
2008-12-17 . chapter 2
M, interesting. So if she's dead who is that in the prologue? Very, very intersting. Looking forward to the next chapter.
Common Ninja
2008-12-15 . chapter 2
Wow brilliant I'm so happy that this story has been updated
xEternalPainx
2008-12-14 . chapter 2
Whoa, didn't see that one coming. Shego, in a bikini? Wish I could see that xD Anyway, nicely written. Can't wait for the next update.
xx Dark Angel Baby xx
2008-12-14 . chapter 2
that was great please update soon! thank you!
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