I like the story so far, but you might want to edit the format of it, so the speaking is on a different line, instead of it being all together.

great story all in all but before publishing go back and check your grammer and see if anything doesnt make sense.

that was a really intense chapter i liked it

definatly good loved the ending of this chapter

another good chapter

a bit of grammer mistakes where a few words need to be added. All in all good chapter

this was a good chapter.

same as chapter 1 too many "saids".was a good chapter as well. might be a bit soon for serena to find out she's pregnent.

need to use other words instead of "said" all the time. other than that its really good i think you should continue.

sequal?

:-) :-) :-) :-) :-)

cute ending

the story had good intentions however it was rushed and unrealistic

nice ending I think u should keep making these story and a chapter of life when she has craving,morning sickness... And when the baby is born and the rest of there life

w0w...that was so messed up.

yay happy ending