Okay, that was lovely. Really sweet and thoughtful, but without the extreme fluffiness that usually wipes the realism out of stories. Very nice.

Oh - that was really good.

Oh! This is such a wonderful work! This made me smile and somehow I felt what Hermione felt that moment...it was truly wonderful! Thank you for sharing this!

This was very, very sweet. Adorable.

Aw! This was adorable. I love it.

<3 Steel Scorpion

I almost favorite-d the story and left the page. But I remember how disappointed I was when someone favorite-d mine and didn't leave a comment.

Your story, your story left a warm glow in me, like there's a firefly glowing in my stomach. It's so warm, and enchanting. I honestly was pulled into the sweet, surreal moment when everyone danced with their partners...

Lovely.

-wc

Aw. Teh cute. It slays me. It's like a millionty small cute fluffy animals in a pet store window cute. I cannot withstand the tall wagging and nose twitching *falls victim and begins to cuddle shamelessly*


Now I have to run away and reclaim my dignity by reading something dark and disturbing. Preferably with a not happy ending...naw lies. I NEED MORE FLUFF!

Great job, more please!

aww sweet :)

>.< cute!

I really really liked this. I have never come across a story with this type of a plotline and I think it was really well done and super unique. great job! :)

I've found this story very endearing and sweet. I especially liked how you described the atmosphere that was created after Harry and Pansy stared dancing, it was truly magical and I was able to imagined it almost perfectly.

May be there are some repeated words, but that is easily overlooked by the way the moments unfold.

Thank you for writing and sharing this.

This is so beautifully written.

Really love the story. Also, i adore the fact that Pansy was the one who made the first move. It made it all the more magical.

Your stories rock!
I'm now determined to read every one of them, so you better expect some more reviews. (but not until wednesday, I'm wille be going on vacation for three days)
Lovely how you let Pansy take the first step. I've always thought her to be more than was showed.
Thanks for writing,

Xx

I loved how it was so sweet and some thing could have hapened

So sweet, so perfect...take that, you yucky, icky Astoria!