 ACT II 2009-01-25 . chapter 3Yoshi has a bodyguard? Peach doesn't like Dedede?
NUEE D-d,DEE iZ aye Cillr3?
I just figured this out now.
OLOLOLOLOLOLOL the Smashers are oblivious to it.
OLOLOLOLOLOLOL I'm ripping off another author by copying his original joke of OLOLOLOLOLOLOL.
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OLOLOLOLOLOLOL. |
 IStalkKirby 2009-01-04 . chapter 3[“The power of LOVE!”
Nothing happened.]
XD in your face Dedede.
YAY DEAD SONIC
YAY STILL A DEAD LUIGI
YAY EVERYONE ELSE ALIVE
Don't kill Dedede! Oh...wait... |
 Ripper22 2009-01-03 . chapter 3Hey, I care about this story! I leik Yoshi, Please don't kill him! At least, if you are, make him one of the last to die. Like, one of the last 10. Good job, again, I may Fave this. Probably next chapter. Is Dedede going to kill EVERYONE? Or just those few whom hate him? Don't kill Lucas, either Please. |
 ACT II 2008-12-24 . chapter 2“Yes!” Dedede laughed. “Mourning for your death!”
The penguin pushed the bed down the stair case, and it hitched on one of the steps and crashed into the wall Luigi-first.
Dedede, satisfied by his fate, walked down the stairs to get a fresh glass of OJ.
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Was this an artsy symbolic thing towards OJ Simpson?
Or not?
I LIKED THE PART WITH THE BACON. |
 Razzkat 2008-12-19 . chapter 2[Sonic rummaged through the contents of Dedede’s room, making sure to inspect everything twice. In one box he dumped the penguin’s stuff, and in the other he dumped the penguin’s stuff that he wanted to keep.]
...LOL!
Anyway, hilarious chapter; I loved everything with Sonic, and...well, King Dedede gets more awesome...all the time. Great job. |
 Ripper22 2008-12-17 . chapter 2This is disturbing...like a Pancake/Waffle hybrid...so anyways, Luigi is obviously first to go. Duh. You guys hate him. So, Yoshi is trying desperately to dtop the madness. Yoshi is probably my 2nd most favorite smasher, second to Dedede. I hope he lives. And Lucas, of course. I uh, look forward to more, I guess. |
 ACT II 2008-12-16 . chapter 1IT WAS FUNNY WHEN HE ONLY GOT TO EET TOO GRAMZ OPH food.
Cruise ships? Explosions in five days? Violent Rampages? Penguins? Cats? Cats? Cats? Cats? Cats? Cats? Cats? *malfunctions and implodes*
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Cats?
I REVIEW'D |
 IStalkKirby 2008-12-16 . chapter 2Being rebellious and totally rad is cool, you say?
*doesn't review* YEAH
POOR DEDEDE :(
Actually, he's decidedly creepy this go-around. Which in turn makes him awesome again.
Yay faved. |
 Razzkat 2008-12-14 . chapter 1Awesome story, Gooey, especially since it stars King Dedede. What's wrong withthe other Smashers?! King Dedede is awesome...
Very funny work, and impeccable grammar, as always. Great job. |
 Ripper22 2008-12-14 . chapter 1...
Um, yay? Dedede is awesome. But I don't see WHY the smashers hate him. Ah, well. I'll read this, Gooey. I can tell you and Hoogiman are brothers, just how you two write; This is something that Hoogiman would write, even the style of humor is similar. That was meant as a compliment.
Anyways? Uh, yay that you're writing again. I look foward to more. |