Love this chapter!

Omg I loved that story. I don't even know what the best part was but it was amazing. You are An awesle writer.

Kelly

I almost cried at the end. Before it wasn't as detailed and now I feel bad because Dally regretted his suicide. If only he had thought about it a little more... :(

Oh. So sad in the end! Great story. :D

This story is really awsome! I was wondering if you could give us cherry's POV on hearing what she did...Could you PLEASE kill off the cop that beat up Dallas? I would really appreciate it. As long as you don't mind i may comment with other ideas...every chapter or so...I'm sending this story to the Mopel circle for them to read, and if they like it they'll send it to the TC circle!

Oh...man...

I had this idea for a story, about Cherry and Dallas having this "thing", but I think you kinda beat me to it! Seriously, I wrote the first chapter, and it was a lot like this one, with them meeting in the lot and everything. Anyways, I'd thought I'd just say that. Wow, I was reading and was like uh...that's weird.

Strange how things like that happen, huh?

This was good. Really good. I liked it a lot, especially the end.

Love your story! The Outsiders is the greatest book ever.

seriously...i love your story...it's great to see it from Dally's side of the story instead of Ponyboy's...i finally realized Dally didn't have the "greatest" life either...he didn't recieve love from his parents, he had emotions, he hated to smoke, etc...lol and some parts made me laugh...anyway...really great story )

good story

I think that Soda actually had Dally give Pony the letter AND the money. I don't think that he actually paid Dallas.

"Say pretty please," Two-Bit laughed.

"FUCK!" Dally yelled in response.

'Close enough,' was my first thought as I cracked up. Seriosuly, this story's _golden_.

This is literally THE best Outsiders fic I've read. *huggles author* Thank you. _

Great fic. Excellent work. :) You've really captured Dallas's side of the story in the book very well. :-)

*Tears are still falling down as i speak...*

that was... wow... omigosh... that was so good i cant even tell you how good. oh, that was so sad... you wrote that so well you sound like a pro author! Better than that. its was so, deep, good, and wonderful... but so sad... ok... thats just... so good... im done...

*mouth is still wide open with tears smearing my mascara...*