wow, that's was a shizzle story bro - like awesome ow gee XD

Yeah, I really liked what u did with tha characters and stuff and yeah, just generally WOW :D

this was a good story, i hope you write the third part soon

this is good you should write a sequel I know what happen at the gate with hiei and yukina and between botan and hiei. PLEASE!

that was an unexpected twist. I love the ending, but it needs to be expanded upon... What exactly changed?

Excellent work! Twas great little story. So sweet and unique style! Great job! ^o^v

there are not enought Botan stories around here. good job with this one, I particuarly like romance free ones.

Nicely done ;) Great job! I look forward to more!