Daaaaaamn, that was HOT!

Damn, maybe she shoudn't fuck with Bella.

Fucking Awesome ass shower scene!

Damn, Jessica is her roommate.

I was hoping that it would be Bella.

Kick Ass prologue!

this story was so sad i wanted alice and bella to stay to gether but it was still good thanks for the story.

this story is so sad it made my cry in the train

i really loved it

I cant fucking breath right now.. my chest is tightning up ,, that was amazing .. you are an amazing author .. i just wished things would of ended differently .

That was...wow.I don't even know what to say,it was just..wow.

You are a fucking writing story really moved me as corny as it you so much for sharing this,and once again wow.

I am hooked now - Great job -

:'( omg! i am wailing like a baby! such an awsum story but sad ending :( loved it though!

I admit I am upset about the ending, hoping for one of those cliche ending, where Bella gets the help and in the end, Alice and Bella will be reunited.

However the more I read, I understod what your were saying, It was like one of those typical fanifiction stories, your words had an impact on me. Sometimes I understood what Alice goes though, we are who we are but we have two faces, one that shows to the world, and one who we truly are but we can't reveal, only to hide.

Alice thought that she can save Bella, love her and Bella will be fine, but I think she knew in the end, that she couldn't save her and so much has happened between them that it won't work out. As much as I hate to admit, I can understand why Alice knew that it over.

Fuck, the story did make me me cry, maybe because as much as Alice did find her happy ending, love, acceptance from her parents, many in real life arn't fortunate. For me, I guess I can't show who I truly am, becuase there won't be acceptance such as Alice found.

It was good to see Bella back, but I knew she wanted to be back with Alice, but I think it was for the best they never got back together because even they did, the past will always be there. Bella needs something, fresh, new that can see the real Bella, not the fu*ked up Bella from the past.

It was truly a great story, and it will be in my head for years...

It was truly a bitter sweet ending...

wow...

your story is just.. beautiful

it's not a typical alice/bella story which they end up together

and I really like that

you have a gift to write

really well done..

can't wait to read more from you

this is a good story but the end sucked why didnt the end up together :(

This is an amazing story but seriously, it has nothing to do with twilight. You should just change the main characters names and keep it as a fiction piece.

But really, I really enjoyed reading it. great work.