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I am a bad friend for taking so long to review especially since you've given me so many of my favorite things in one chapter!
WOLSEY! WOLSEY! WOLSEY! Yay! And a little bit about Joan and their kids! And then of course there was motherly Anne and Uncle Arthur, both of which were adorable.
But lets be real, you know what has made me so excited.

CROMWELL! My Sun and Stars, My first love, My man, My hero THOMAS MOTHERFING CROMWELL. I am so excited to see what you do with him. And am holding a little tiny candle in my heart that you will include that dinner scene with Elizabeth, Thomas, and Anne. Because I am a pusher. And I love you.

I think you could really write this as a book! Seriously, forty-six chapters is loads so far, though of course some are shorter than others you could pad them out with dialogue and description, it would be really popular since the Tudors are in fashion now thanks to Hilary Mantel and the Tudors programme. I would definetly buy it!

This fanfic is by far one of the best fanfics as well as one to have such a profound affect on me!

Please update asap! I really want them to unite as the couple we hope they can become once more.

I hate her father to death. He should have been beheaded the sob.

'She did not want to refuse him for this reason, even if she did not trust him anymore. She certainly did not feel her heart swell with the same admiration and tenderness when they saw each other, when they were obligated to make public appearances. Her skin did not burn with desire when he held her hand and kissed it. When he kissed her lips she occasionally felt bile rise in her throat.' - Well that is to be expected. He's going to have to earn every love and trust.

'But Arthur's words surprised her. Kill his brother for striking his wife? She had never felt so proud to call Arthur her husband.' - I LOVE THEM TOGETHER. It makes me swoon pathetically with sentimental longing.

I should stop with my rant but this affects me so much on an emotional level. Whatever, Arthur is a bigger man. I wonder if things can ever truly go back the way it was for Anne and Henry. Despite everything, they are my OTP. Jane does not even love him (my belief). He was nothing more than an ego boost and elevation for her family. So naive as to think if she was in Anne's position, that Henry's desire for her would not wane and seek others. Stupid girl. She prefers to be a mistress to a man already married... dear lord.

So fucking hypocritical and contradictory the terms laid out by men back then. Treason and behead if the women was to have an affair and yet men did not have to even GIVE any means of discretion but it was 'within their own rights.'

He cannot even bring himself to tell her the truth. Cannot believe he has the audacity to lie and deny it to her face. Scumbag.

"You will be King someday, my dear Duke, but they will never love you as they loved your brother. He will always be a better man than you." - He deserve it as it is TRUE.

He slapped her oh good god. To cheat is one thing but abuse? I can't take this...

If he was going to continue his affair with Jane, he was going to be more careful this time. - dick.
'He would be a better man this time, or at least appear a better man.' - I'm starting to despise Henry.

Poor Mary being rejected and cast aside like that. Anne should be happy that her sister FINALLY found love, the station of his status should not even be important.

poor excuse of a husband. Ungrateful.

IMBECILE. To have ruined and lied and broken promises of fidelity when Anne gave him all that he could EVER WISH FOR, her undying and promises of love and loyalty and A SON. The only thing he wanted most. Anne who has done so much to for him bore him 2 children for gods sake and pregnant with another. I'm aware it's not alot but in those times, anything was possible and the rates of miscarriage or stillborn children was frighteningly high.

Arthur is so much more worthy of a woman's love. Katherine is so lucky and they deserve each other. "The fault lies with Henry, really, although the passive nature of this Seymour girl certainly isn't helping matters."

Jane is so naive and complying in her thoughts it is no wonder I dislike her. I can not despise her but rather neutral about her as A PERSON. So obtuse about Henry's intentions despite sending flirtatious looks his way. Her way of thinking is so juvenile. 'He was likely to be gentle with her, like hewas in all things. He was kindest man she knew (even kinder than her own father) and always called her sweetheart.' - ARE YOU SERIOUS?

Hal my poor boy. My heart aches for such a child who's already condemned due to his parentage and status as illegitimate child while his half siblings are so very royal. I'm saddened that Anne has become more neglectful over the 2 years. :'( So glad things between them are settled now.

Elizabeth is so attentive towards Henry but not so much Arthur. I can understand that with their certain disposition she's not as affectionate towards her older but... I would have thought there would be AT LEAST some connections or communications she would have with Arthur. I was wrong.

I'm thrilled though that Henry X Anne moments are more apparent.

BUT OH HELL NO THE NO. NOT JANE SEYMOUR. THE SLUT WOULD RUIN EVERYTHING. AND HENRY BEING THE HORNY BULL DOG OF A FOOL HE WOULD FALL FOR HER TRAPS...

Anne gave birth to a son?!
I am not displeased just rather was expecting another girl in which Henry would overreact and cause to widen the gap between him and Anne. I guess it's better this way.

I love how Arthur manages to handle his composure in every situation no what who the opposing forces be and in this case, Edward. Who's just too pompous and condescending for his own good at the moment. To see Katherine and Arthur so empty without Mary I hope the best for them but at least they have each other to love and comfort and that is more than enough.

I'm so glad Katherine and Anne has made efforts to restore their acquaintances.

Oh poor Mary. Married for love but in the end she was ultimately and inevitably let down by Brandon. A man who was fickle at heart and who despite his poor and neglectful treatment, she still loved him and proved to be most faithful. Anne finally had a good friend besides Elizabeth that is.
Henry just shutup. I have nothing to say about him.

Oh Katherine. I cannot even begin to try and fathom what it is like to have to bury your own children a young one at that. It would surely leave me as utterly broken and pessimistic as most would expect.

Anne you need to stop being prideful and obstinate about 'Katherine or so meddling in your life.'

Some many find Anne's character as you described 'Mary Sue' but i think not given the fact that she became Queen under different circumstances and has started befriending Mary and possibly Katherine